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Tripple1ZRO4mthCommentedCh 967 Crushing Balls- Tripple1ZRO6mthCommented
I think it’s a big exaggeration that one of the top monsters - a tyrant can be pushed and almost defeated by a heavy cart
'Come on! Just a little bit more!' - Tripple1ZRO10mthReplied to Magrijack_2
such fights have their own beauty and it was necessary for max to advance as it was time with his high talent. My first time writing so I am still improving the plots and ways for characters to develop and advance
As this power surged within him, Skal watched from the other side of the training yard, a realization dawning on him. His eyes widened in disbelief and then narrowed in defiance. He understood that Max was breaking through, transforming from ordinary to extraordinary, where one's potential for magic and strength were realized. But for it to happen in the middle of their fight, right before his eyes, Skal could not and would not accept it. - Tripple1ZRO10mthReplied to Magrijack_2
You learn something new every day
Recognizing his fervor, his parents gifted him a spot at a prestigious billiards academy on his sixth birthday. This proved to be a turning point in young Roman's life. He was fortunate enough to train under a nationally recognized champion who instructed his students with unyielding professionalism and infectious passion. - Tripple1ZRO10mthReplied to TheBrightOne
Oh, You are a Bright one. That was intentional, but I might go back and add it. I mentioned that the village is in north-eastern Valtoria, therefore Kingdom of Arindor would be around that location. But It will not be significant to the story and is very small, therefore I did not mention it.
To the east is the Kingdom of Kharagor, a land of rugged mountains and deep valleys. Kharagor is a relatively weak kingdom, ruled by a young and inexperienced king who is struggling to maintain his power. The people of Kharagor are divided by internal strife and are vulnerable to invasion. - Tripple1ZRO10mthReplied to SniperWeasel_25Ch 24 Max’s Elemental Affinities
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well it would also require a table and growing up the main task is to learn about the world. There will always be time for it, plus he is not a craftsman, so the quality would not be good. Plus how would the village and his mom react to his "invention"?
Looking at her now six-year-old son and hearing him proclaim such words happiness filled Aeliana. "Max wait! I almost forgot." Saying those words, Aeliana rushed into her room. It took half a minute for her to come back carrying a small wooden box. "Max. You are about to depart to the academy where you will make friends, enemies, and train to become stronger. Your dad, before leaving, left this box for you. In it lies a pendant. Carry it with you at all times as it will protect you and, in the future, when you are strong enough, you will understand its secrets." - Tripple1ZRO10mthReplied to Moon_Winchester
hmm interesting, never heard of this.
His silent contemplations resonated within his peculiar confinement. He yearned for nothing more than to reach the zenith of his sport and ignite a resurgence of pool. However, the acknowledgment of his untimely death and his virgin status was a harsh pill to swallow. "First, a pandemic derailed my dreams. Then, just as I was nearing my goal, this...end. It's exasperating!" His frustration formed a silent scream, reverberating within his mind. - Tripple1ZRO10mthReplied to Moon_Winchester
I combined it all into a single term pool to simplify
Regret weighed heavily on his heart, "To my parents, my friends... I'm sorry. My single-minded pursuit of pool might not have made me the ideal son or friend, but such an abrupt departure... It's unjust." His silent apology echoed within his solitary realm. - Tripple1ZRO10mthCommented
I actually teared up seeing this
Video games here weren't viewed as plagues on society or an online drug, but viewed as the ninth art form, respected and even promoted by certain governments. - Tripple1ZRO10mthReplied to Radpiplup
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I will relook and consider. Thank you!
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fixed, thanks for reading!
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will fix. Thanks
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Father came back and took his mom to explore the world, knowing that Max would be ok training and getting stronger at the academy
Your father has returned, Maximus. After all these years, he finally found his way back home. You should have seen his face when he saw how much you've grown, even in the portraits that hang on our walls. He was a whirlwind of emotion, pride and regret battling in his eyes. - Tripple1ZRO10mthReplied to T_Gold
They left together
He unfolded the letter, his hands trembling slightly. The silence of the house seemed to deepen, as if holding its breath for the words that were about to be revealed. - Tripple1ZRO10mthReplied to T_Gold
Yes
Lily's eyes widened in surprise, and a faint blush tinged her cheeks. She hesitated for a moment before answering. "Sure, Max. I'd love to."