I would also recommend creation patreon exclusive content other than just advanced chapters.

I just don't think there is anything interesting in the far off future of the fic that would merit a patreon sub. Like, the fic is interesting, sometimes something interesting happens that catches my attention, the smut is good, but there doesn't seem to be an overarching story that would demand a sub. I can just wait until the good stuff, if there are any. Any way, what I am trying to say is that there is no incentive for subscribing to read ahead because I can't see anything that is worth my money to read right now that I can just wait for.

Ok, I get the limitations placed by the world, he can only generate 1000 Gold a day right now. But I am confused by this last section. Like, if he spends 500 Gold, then wouldn't he be able to generate 1000 gold again tomorrow then pay the charity- Oh, he can't pay charity because he isn't old enough. You need to make that more clear, I had to write this to figure it out.

Don't use sound effects, just tell us the sound that happens and we can imagine it much better than you could explain it to us in written form.

The best balance between musculature, muscle definition, flexibility, and aesthetics. Much like a sprint runner's physique.

Its good. Its kind of slow, but good. I like it.

Essence of Blank

Absolute Erasure

Existence Manipulation

No.

No, this does not happen like this and that is not our thought process. If you wear dirty or worn out clothes, then you can expect to be judged as poor or some variation of that. Celebrities are certainly not like that either. Well, not all of them are like that. Just like not all people are good people. This level of racism and clasism is not so open, thought about, or even processed like that. What you WOULD find, is the classic making fun of an asian person's language, how they look, maybe assume they are a poorer class for the more racists bunch. But this level of racism is not mainstream or widespread. It is dramatized for the novel.

Diviiiiiiine Simp!

Waste chapter and annoying. Just get to the good stuff already. Filler

Awesome story, however, thats not how it works... for Superman. Magic affects him as does any other normal mortal person. Meaning that Superman or even Kryptonians don't have any special weakness to magic that causes them to be more vulnerable to magic. It just affects them the same as any normal person. So, the strength this little girl has should not have any effect on Tut's skin, as his skin is near invulerable and the little girl only has 'little girl' strength. Now, if the hands and attacks of the little girl were somehow the enhanced with magic, then yeah awesome. Just a little pet peeve. Anyway, awesome story.

run-on sentence.

Maybe? Perhaps. But they would have to whole-heartedly believe that they are almighty. That's kind of hard to do when your own FATHER is the almighty. But then again it could just be one of those things where maybe they're not that powerful to achieve almighty status. So, I don't know. Maybe? Perhaps? Possibly?

carpet in a classroom? as the floor? heh

Because Iphone apparantly has to official way to save the clipboard. But android is just holding as if to paste and justing clicking clipboard from the options that appear.

Oh the phone. Android or Iphone?

Cutting is taking the characters from the current place and keeping it in the clipboard. Its probably still in your clipboard: To get to your clipboard history at any time, press Windows logo key + V. From the clipboard history, you can paste and pin frequently used items by choosing an individual item from your clipboard menu. Pinning an item keeps it from being removed from the clipboard history to make room for new items.