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Now I am confused with ah man’s age isn’t he 14 right now?
Ah Man is 12 years old right now fyi If anyone ever clicks on this comment
Alley? Aren’t they in a forest in a cave?
‘Violet mist’
Wasn’t she in white martial robes earlier with a veil???
Perception not sweat
Repeat
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You repeat these paragraphs
Panther
Feathers
Just finished chapter 29 and I believe this is shaping pout to be a great story. The intro was a familiar trope, but executed in a quick descriptive but not repetitive manner; also setting up the plot for far into the story. The character development is great, and character interactions aren’t robotic with some natural flow. The world building is descritpitive enough to sate the imagination but not overly detailed like an Atlas. The provided images also greatly improve the mental imagery the author is trying to project about key items or characters in the story. The story is overall one of the better ones I have found on this cite and totally recommend that you read it. It may be Fan fiction but it doesn’t religiously follow the original plot to the point that its boring. 10/10 must read[img=recommend]
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Whirlwind Byakko
His name is Daniel or yuuki not Alex
Ah the slippery slope of ‘greater good’
Really? Jungle near a city?
And like that you lost me