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Beejebes27dCommentedCh 142 Update- Beejebes1mthCommented
to dear degenerate author, I thoroughly enjoy your stories, so I dont know if anyone has said this, but you might wanna look at a game on Steam called Cloud Meadow. Might give you food for thought maybe though it's story is definitely not up to what you cook up so looking forward to more thank you very much.
Ch 22 Back Home - Beejebes4mthCommentedCh 18 Too lazy
- Beejebes6mthCommented
an imperial 1 this early hmmmm okay kinda hope you adjust it since you said it's one of a kind and mix in some venator. But I understand what your doing to a degree and it's you're book. after all Palpatine wants him lock stock and Anakin but we'll this is interesting. though the CIS are in for a bad kicking with a imperial 1 backed up by venators and commanded by thrawn ohhh boy
Ch 23 Ahsoka's Training & New Ship - Beejebes7mthCommentedCh 81 Chapter 71 She, who was blessed by the sword. Unbearable pain.
- Beejebes8mthCommented
noooooo that particular part of the cartoon while funny nooo but if you wanna pull some red vs. blue characters well I won't argue
Also just for a hypothetical question (*wink*). What is everyone's opinions on Dragon ball? Especially Dragon Ball Z? - Beejebes9mthCommented
if you think you need to fix something I'm not gonna complain but otherwise I'm looking forward to more
This book has been deleted. - Beejebes9mthCommentedCh 39 Opinions
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that's what she said. I'll see myself out now.
'And to think that the M in MFDD stands for Medium…In that case, what the fuck is L for large for them?' I thought silently looking at the big thing contained in a small package. (Author's note: -_- don't even) - Beejebes10mthReplied to Wingzer0Ch 23 Chapter 22 The Storm Breaks
- Beejebes10mthReplied to Beejebes
and there goes my grammar brain got ahead of myself 😐
So a few things before I start the chapter. I got my ass handed to me in the two new reviews I got today, and both mentioned that my writing is difficult to read, and one of them said it needed to be put through google translate to even read. Is it really that bad? Another thing they both mentioned is that Haruko has no personality, and I'm curious if that sentiment is held by anybody else? Another note is once again people are upset that it feels too much like a slice of life, and I really don't know what else to say at this point. It is a slice of life…. I'm just flabbergasted that people are picking it up knowing that, and then getting upset when the story has a slower pace, and spends more time with interactions than anything else. I have many more positive reviews than negative, but the negative ones hit so much harder, and I don't even know if I should defend myself, or leave it alone? Anyway rant over. - Beejebes1yrCommented
Joker because he says a line that sticks with me "And here we go!"
Trivia: Who's your most favorite villain of all time and why? - Beejebes1yrCommentedCh 84 Kessel