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BleachedKage5x01dCommentedFaster than he could blink, or otherwise react, Gelebor found himself flying through the air, my armored gauntlet leaving a bloody print on his face.- BleachedKage5x03dCommentedVoslaarum and Naslaarum shared one quick look, nodded, and bolted the fuck out of there.
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This should be impossible as it is mandatory to take at least 2 electives. 3 are recommended. More than that requires a time turner.
Therefore, in addition to the core seven classes of Transfiguration, Herbology, Defense Against the Dark Arts, Potions, Charms, Astronomy and History of Magic, Lynn only elected to take Ancient Runes. - BleachedKage5x04dCommentedThis was the Forest of the Menos Grande!
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This paragraph is far too long. It should be split into three or four paragraphs at least to become more readable.
"When I was little, the Dursleys always let their anger out on me. The one who became violent was Vernon. Petunia only shouted at me and they all called me a freak. They told me it would have been better for everybody if I had just died with my parents in the car crash that they caused when they were drunk. Halloween was always the worst. Dudley paraded with all the sweets he got in the neighbourhood from trick or treating and rubbed it into my face that I wouldn't get a single sweet. The first time Vernon beat me with his belt that I remember was when I was five. Before all injuries were from him grabbing me too hard and shoving me into the cupboard under the stairs where I slept. He had been denied a promotion at work he had hoped for and got drunk and vented his anger on me. At school things didn't get better except that I was away from Privet Drive most of the time. When it was apparent that I was smarter than Dudley they forced me to not outdo him." Harry didn't know why all those words spilled out of him, but now that he had started he for some reason couldn't stop and he felt strangely safe in Sirius' arms, who was rubbing circles on his back. - BleachedKage5x04dCommentedCh 87 Chapter 87: Goodafternoon, Mr. Green
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there is a t missing
After another fifteen minutes of a tuorous climb, Naruto dropped heavily onto the cold, hard earth at the top and stared up at the crimson sky above him, then closed his eyes and fell completely unconscious. - BleachedKage5x08dCommentedI swear, I could almost see the tears of despair in his eyes.
- BleachedKage5x08dCommentedGetting off the ground I felt horribly off balance as my right eye was CONSIDERABLY more powerful than my left for some reason. 'Is this the aid it was talking about? Better vision? Seems kinda cheap right?' I thought confused. As it turns out I was counting my eggs before they hatched as there was far more to my new eye than I realized at this moment.
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I think writing letters was still fairly common in the early nineties.
After breakfast, Harry excused himself, citing the need to respond to some correspondence. In reality, he sought a quiet moment to reflect on Nicolas Flamel's offer and its implications. Nigel, ever ready with a comment, couldn't resist saying, "Correspondence? What are you now, a minister? Or perhaps planning to revive the lost art of letter writing?" - BleachedKage5x013dCommented"Now that that is done..." I turn to those gathered with an ominous tinge to my voice, only to completely shift it into one of excitement "We party!"
- BleachedKage5x020dCommentedYet just as he was about to reach the door, the entirety of the room burst into pieces, opening the tower up to the skies and giving him a full view of a massive black dragon flying away at full speed.
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If you already provide a number range don't add 'nearly' as well as it doesn't make sense and breaks the flow of the sentence.
In the middle of the dojo there was an Asian woman wearing a white and black track suit with a wooden sword in hand. There were nearly 5-6 kids sitting around the main platform looking at her and a 16-17 year old boy that was standing in the middle. The Asian woman tapped the boy's thigh and then his ankle and said "Your posture must always be perfect like this or else you won't be able to exert all your strength and won't be able to reposition yourself." All the kids nodded as they heard this. The woman looked at Maya and the others and pointed to the clock on the wall. - BleachedKage5x01mthCommentedFor a moment she looks at me exasperated, but then she registers my words and I finally see where all that fear she held for her father went as her eyes practically gleam with vicious intent "A visit home doesn't sound so bad after all."
- BleachedKage5x01mthCommented"Shit." The priest curses, and then quickly pretends he said nothing as all eyes fall fall onto him.
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As far as I know Kakashi never made his genin join the genin corps. Instead he made them pursue civilian carriers.
Of course, at the moment they were few, due to the volatile nature of the shinobi world where conflict could escalate to fully-fledged world wars, but in the future, their numbers would rise because of one copy ninja's high standards. - BleachedKage5x01mthReplied to Jordinary
I don't think so. You underestimate Yuna's cake prank mastery.
Out of nowhere, a cake hit him in the face, breaking off his train of thought while dumbfounding him greatly. - BleachedKage5x01mthCommentedOut of nowhere, a cake hit him in the face, breaking off his train of thought while dumbfounding him greatly.
- BleachedKage5x01mthCommentedThe sarcastic use of one of her rare positive titles finally manages to get a reaction out of my sudden but not unexpected guest, as Boethiah narrows her eyes at me, a glint of interest shining in their molten amber.