writing is decent but what turned me off is the goblin part, very stupid as no goblins would be slave and that goblins hate wizard and will never act subservient so in essence, it's just another hp fic that paints goblins as slaves or nice ones that can't fight back or whatever. this itself is a major turnoff and in the end is nothing but other fics that misconstrued the goblins, at least it's not as bad as this I found Griphook: "OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE REMEMBERS MY NAME! HAVE ALL THE THINGS, LORD POTTER GRYFFINDOR SLYTHERIN HUFFLEPUFF RAVENCLAW ROCKEFELLER!!!"

juts in case you don't know but if Thanos somehow crossed over to her universe/ timeline, then his infinity stones are useless due to not working out of their designated timelines/universe as seen by tva

yuno

I think Kanade can easily be reintegrated since all the supernaturals happens in after life and that can easily excluded if she reincarnated in the real world like the ending

is there any chance in the future for mashiro Shiina and kanade tachibana from angel beats be added? Kanade have never been used at all to the point it's beyond rare and she can easily be included by her waking up from coma or reincarnation or something

also add shiina mashiro

thanks for the good chapter as usual. I do hope that Ai or Ruby Hoshino or both can be added in the future.Another potential if you ever want to consider it can be Kanade from Angel beats? she's so rare and I'd never seen her once appear in fanfics.

bunny

Miku is the best, followed by Nino and Itsuki

Ai Hoshino

would have been better to call it reverie, fantasy, utopian or oneiric or even ephemeral since dream is fleeting.

I know you have no motivation or time but will this story be continued or be left in the dust?I hope you continue thjs

Great overall and I liked it so far and looking forward to more but author needs improvement regarding his understanding of the power system in dxd. i believe it goes from2 wings - low4 wings - mid6 wings - high8 wings - ultimate10 wings - Satan12 wings -Rizevim or Sirzech level Satan or super devil

hoping he goes to fgo and adds fate Suzuka to his harem

he'll have to learn that he can't Rely on information that Chaldea provides as truth and remain open minded to possibilities as he will encounter and clash against several servants that have capabilities that does not represent what their usual class entails such as Xuanzang or King Hassan etc.

I like it so far but It need some improvements regarding the writing. the sentence don't run smoothly and are cluttered and need more commas to fix it. it can also be improved more by refining the choice of the words that are used. and regarding the character, I like him so far but his design is lets say overused because we already have a fox and it would have been better if the Author went with a ten tailed wolf in my eyes.

need more details on future interactions but I'll still say you did better than regular compared to those I read who had no experienced in it during my 10 yrs stint in fanfictions.

generic fic with author not being able to get his characters personality right such as Lucy blushing when she'd never blush when she just meets mc.Author writing is bad and can't even be bothered to improve it.author also can't seem to take criticism well with how he regards it as complaining and how the commentor should watch og show if wants to complain.in the end, is just a regular WN author that focused on generic fics instead of quality

idiot