Read through ch 31, truly an interesting concept. I’m just wondering if he ever truly gets a chance at a full rebirth or not, because without the full rebirth I doubt he could be worthy of any of the girls.

I am only basing this off the six chaps available for free. Honestly, seems unrealistic and contrived. Using all his strength during cpr is a way to break ribs. If he’s that tired after rescuing 2-3 people… he’s not going out for #12 using determination… he would of drowned. Repeated use of his feelings/situation just becomes redundant and makes me want to skip paragraphs which means I might miss things. Also, he is stuck on an island. Being stuck in an island makes me picture the guy being buried neck deep in sand never to be let out. The story may get better, but not worth putting my passes into from the small portion unlocked.

Honestly, at this point the story is stupid. If your viewpoint is so far beyond mortals then how can you enjoy mortal entertainment? He should of reincarnated with no memories to actually live and experience it. Also, using spells to program…. Ugh.

I’ve only read the first 30 chaps, but the direction of the story is interesting. A bit emotional in some areas due to the loss resonating with some recent losses of my own, but I think it adds to the story.

Was the power system listed in chapter 24 abandoned? Cause with only 40 mana she should still be level 1…

Nah, he just gave the gold digger what she wants… should of walked off with the money or donated it to the school or charity instead of letting her have a dime.

So… the author basically wants to go back and rewrite a story about going back and rewriting history… 😏

I’m glad these people are authors… cause if they were engineers with these math skills, people would definitely die. 🤣

This reminds me of another story where the fiancé didn’t show up in time for the marriage and she was forced to find another person to marry or end up with a random person or something. She got together with some war hero/prince who had a case of amnesia and was going through some susceptible period by accident. Instead of mechs she was a chef and was bringing back real food to the interstellar era. This is slightly different but the other seemed better written.

I would say it’s possible the town was founded there because of the bazaar, but didn’t they mention it was because of the health potion herb?

So, all those relatives that donate an organ or bone marrow have possibly gotten a special reward? 😝

Where did the 1000 SP come from?

The first 40 chaps were pretty good. On a total side note… I had a sudden thought. What if we’re on blue star and some of the authors are transmigrators. After all, we have no magic or cultivation or advanced tech. So, all they can do to earn money is tell stories of their former worlds…

Honestly, I don’t understand the video much either. My understanding of the relationship is that she was basically a gold digger and he was a simp for her. So how does she portray that to earn her a positive reputation? As for Das, he got scammed, but at the same time any decent women would know his character and look him up right?

Unable = able?

Hope you are feeling better and I am so happy to get to read more of your writing!

You didn’t even bring up the fact 18 is the awakening age. So are they like sextuplets since they all awakened at the same ceremony?

If I had to guess, A pervert’s world, might be the story you were thinking of. At least that is what came to mind for me.

Since he died, that mission really was impossible 🤣

I’m just going to say, this was much better than I thought it would be from the synopsis. The mc’s comprehension is definitely op, but the author seems to limit his cultivation speed and upgrades to an extant. Hope this gets picked, because I would like to see where it goes.