Yugito nii? Konan?

Amazing, do you have a p@treon?

thanks for the chapter

make more or ill eat your liver

Dude is actually a retard. check his comment history.

Seriously dude go fuck yourself, maybe learn how to not sound like an absolute retard while you're at it.

Why do you type like a retarded little Chinese boy?

Please tell me you're continuing this.

If you want to read a novel where everything is handed to the mc on a silver platter, go read one of the thousands of mediocre Chinese fanfictions. It's honestly incredibly shitty of you to tank the reviews of a new novel because you disagree with a single choice. You could've just left. Also, the reason he didn't pass out from the 400 clones he used against Mizuki was the kyuubi offsetting the mental strain with it's chakra. His choice was honestly inconsequential and to come to the reviews and pout like an entitled child makes me feel bad for anyone who has to get within 10 meters of you.

Honestly one of the best Naruto fanfics I've seen in a while, the grammar and structure is neat and easy to follow with no confusion. Names are all correct, author clearly knows his stuff. The development and character/world building is perfect, so much that some of the sadder bits actually affected me and I feel like I can clearly picture everything in my mind. Some choices are a bit controversial, but remain within the realm of possibility. Overall an amazing fanfic and I hope the author sees it to the end. (If you decide to continue this on another platform let us know)

Literally will not stop showing up for "recently updated" hhhhhhhhhhhhjdstugdtihd to dtifyydyyhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's it's like when you make stuff unnecessarily detailed to hit the word requirement for an essay lol

yeah that's probably because a lot of multiverse stuff is poorly written or lazy. a lot of authors want to keep all the powers of the previous world and it fucks up the power balancing. I'm talking a complete reset in everything except his plasmids and memories, or an au novel where he gets sent to another world instead of danmachi.

I would love for him to be able to go to different worlds, reincarnating or transmigrating from the previous world with only his plasmids and experience. Multiverses can be so good as long as you don't make the mistake of trying to preserve all the powers of the previous world.

Why do you you type like a little Chinese kid with brain damage who runs all his comments through Google translate five times?

Dude's a fucking retard, just check his comment history.

Has this been dropped?

Haha I'm liking that Yami still has a sense of humor and isn't just 'generic emotionless mc #37' Thanks for the chap.

is he finally not going to be dragging around a sharpened roof tile?

If you want perfect grammar don't look for it on the fanfiction section of Webnovel. FFS man, it's a free story AND only the first chapter.