Honestly one of the best Naruto fanfics I've seen in a while, the grammar and structure is neat and easy to follow with no confusion. Names are all correct, author clearly knows his stuff. The development and character/world building is perfect, so much that some of the sadder bits actually affected me and I feel like I can clearly picture everything in my mind. Some choices are a bit controversial, but remain within the realm of possibility. Overall an amazing fanfic and I hope the author sees it to the end. (If you decide to continue this on another platform let us know)
celestial_001
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LIKEHey if you don't like my fanfic just don't read. And I am just writing this for fun so, why do you think I would ask someone to make a fake review. If I would have asked people to write fake reviews for me, then my reviews would have already surpassed 50.
asaade:fake review, the author knows what he was doing? making him faint from a hundred kage bunshin while he didn't when he did a thousand? what a licking dog or are you paid to make a fake review
im not reading your so called smart ff pfffft, i already dropped it long time ago because of your so called smart move. just look at his review one look and you will know it was a fake review "perfect background" and "make me sadder" hahaha that's just so funny
celestial_001:Hey if you don't like my fanfic just don't read. And I am just writing this for fun so, why do you think I would ask someone to make a fake review. If I would have asked people to write fake reviews for me, then my reviews would have already surpassed 50.