You could tell that there was effort put into the story, thought was put into it. Also I am pretty sure that the cover is the escort from town of Salem

That ain’t true. The first few chapters were fantastically written. Turning into a demon is a tried and true cliche, and it fits the story well. It really does. Maybe you are busy with life, but oh man you are wrong when you say you are a bad writer. I think that you believe it has no potential because the backround world of the story might feel a bit rushed, however, if a little bit more backround was explained, and used in this, I would be in heaven

It is a really solid story. Think of it as maybe The Giver, but not trash and actually decent. Almost everything about it is well written, thorough, and polished. You can tell that there was work done in designing the background and world in general.

Like sometimes not offensively bad, but mostly, the racism, stupidity of the characters, stupidity of the world, storyline, and other stuff make this a terrible read. I forced myself to read the entire thing (rip) and the ending is also extremely anticlimactic. Just... please... don’t read this.

I feel like when he whips out a completely never before seen magic should have had a bigger reaction

Not quite sure but mine from 3 months ago is still here

Some more edits: the reviews seem botted, or the book was completely gutted like 4 months ago. Most of the things I’ve read in the reviews are inaccurate and sometimes flat out lying. Save yourself coins, and time, and don’t read this book.

It started off quite good, with an amazing concept (parody lol), but the cliches were too much, too frequent, too forced. Maybe remove the cliches and tweak the story to have some of the characters have more depth, and I sense greatness in it. I just feel ... wasted potential in it. It felt repetitive and annoying in the end, due to the cliches, but this could be something good.

It is a nice, rather calming book to read, with some unexpected but welcome humour, with misunderstandings which lead to comedic situations.

No, it is more of a happy, chill story to read.

Started off good, goes too fast, getting worse, characters are stupid. Needs major rewrite

Amazing book so far. Reminds me of the giver

This is pretty well developed, plot makes sense. I like it!

This seems good. Author, keep up The great work!

The system is the devil lol

Owned by the system im betting one of shiros class ups will pit her inchsrge of the system

*killstreak announcer sweats nervously*

Huh

What book

Shes gonna meeet the fire queen what if lucius findS about the bomb