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too many chapters just for our mc to think deeply with a monologue, why not just release snape's emotions so he becomes a new person, also why does he always compare himself with the Potter, even though he could be the MC of his own story, and various useless worries, are repeated again and again, as if to remind the reader. This hasn't happened yet and can be prevented, novels that bring too much emotion into the story are good, but not emotions of low self-esteem, fear of things that haven't happened, etc., it should make our MCs more. Regarding his personality when explaining himself, the author is not very good at placing him, who is our MC? reincarnated people? or Severus?
from various fanfics danmachi mc always explains his powers and how they are used, well even if he doesn't explain how he can use them it still makes me to give minus points, why? Because that's stupid, okay! Just guessing how MC's power works, To be honest, the MC's behavior, which is already operational, but like this, gives a strange feeling, like why does it have to be explained, ughh. sorry about that
Chinese mentality when reincarnated