Review Detail of _Plague_Doctor_ in Just Another Chat Group

too many chapters just for our mc to think deeply with a monologue, why not just release snape's emotions so he becomes a new person, also why does he always compare himself with the Potter, even though he could be the MC of his own story, and various useless worries, are repeated again and again, as if to remind the reader. This hasn't happened yet and can be prevented, novels that bring too much emotion into the story are good, but not emotions of low self-esteem, fear of things that haven't happened, etc., it should make our MCs more. Regarding his personality when explaining himself, the author is not very good at placing him, who is our MC? reincarnated people? or Severus?