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The Universe's Greatest showman. ( I made this one fairly early in my writing career and I was definitely a lot... less mature when I wrote it lol. So I'll rewrite this one if picked. Actually give limits and stuff to the deal power for instance.)- Mario_Alonso7dCommented
I would like a MHA story where the MC is a little older than Mirko and not trying to become a Hero, but instead is building a secret organization to take over the world. Something like poor to rich, then rich to world domination. Some quirk ideas could be magnetism, psychokinesis, biokinesis, dream manipulation, parallel timeline creation, technokinesis, Time Stop, or even something like path to victory, or even number man powers.
4) Anything you might want to add?? - Mario_Alonso15dReplied to PsyLoRD
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Leaving a comment here to see what SCP this was. [img=Relaxed]
"Fine, we will do it, any risk is worth the value of 99999." He said aloud as he made his decision. - Mario_Alonso1mthCommentedCh 38 Omniscience in Marvel 37
- Mario_Alonso1mthCommentedBeing a hero, however, only required me to beat up bad guys and save innocent people! What was more simple than that?!
- Mario_Alonso2mthCommentedCh 9 Cap 9
- Mario_Alonso3mthCommented
komi shouko
Insert [Anime, Manga, Manhwa.. waifus you want to see in this fiction] - Mario_Alonso4mthCommented
I prefer this. You could make a 2nd fanfic where you follow the pokemon grunt route. Loving the story by the way.
Option 1 - Let The Story Proceed How It Should According To The Original Games. - Mario_Alonso4mthCommented
Yes! This is fantastic, I hope you can do this author.
I would like to give a early warning to everyone, that I will be introducing oc both friend and antagonists early in the story with even oc plots as many things were left out by Kishimoto. And I've always wanted to play with the Naruto story in my own way, rather than using generic fanfiction plot. So If this isn't your preferred style, consider yourself warned. - Mario_Alonso4mthCommented
but... couldnt you live for a month with 1 pokedollar?? does this mean that an egg is worth 15000 months of food...
Undeterred, I engaged in a vigorous round of haggling, driving the price down to a more reasonable 15,000 Pokédollars. - Mario_Alonso4mthCommentedCh 371 Innovative
- Mario_Alonso5mthCommentedSo, tell me. What powers can be given to Riser Phenex?
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It is a bit below average...WQ is somewhat choppy. The author doesnt speak English all that well and there are too many chinese expressions that ruin the flow and mood. There are even statements that contradict each other. Still, it is readable.SD is okay. Some dude is transmigrated to the year 1975. Though we are told the protagonist is someone that came to NY looking for opportunities he feels like a standard chinese story MC. Anyways, still okay.CD. Very unlikeable. As I mentioned before, MC Feels like a generic chinese protagonist. Other characters behave irrationally or outright weird several times. US. Very good. Author seems motivated and is pumping those chapters out.WB. It is okay. Author did in fact research abojt the things that he talks about but ghe way people are makes the world background feel weird, destroying the inmersion. Overall a 2,8. As an advice, I would try to avoid chinese cliches and behaviors when writing in a western setting. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] Anyways, have a nice day author.
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Police I swear to God, not simping for a Child. (Couldnt find a gif with the song lyrics, so I chose the next best gif.)
'But FBI, I swear to God I only see her as my little sister when she was a kid!!'. - Mario_Alonso6mthCommented
nope
No. - Mario_Alonso6mthCommented
An apartment costs as little as a pokemon with unknown potential.
The cheapest one had a rent of 700 Poke, while the most expensive one cost 2000 Poke. The buying price, at least the ones that could be bought, was ranging from 280.000 to 650.000 Poke. - Mario_Alonso6mthCommented1. Halo X Warhammer
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i would love to see a character who is older than original MC.
While we are still approaching the end of this story, write to me in the comments. What elements would you like to be present in the new story? Which aspects of this story do you think should be improved for the next one, and which should be minimized?