Review Detail of Mario_Alonso in King of games in the United States

It is a bit below average...WQ is somewhat choppy. The author doesnt speak English all that well and there are too many chinese expressions that ruin the flow and mood. There are even statements that contradict each other. Still, it is readable.SD is okay. Some dude is transmigrated to the year 1975. Though we are told the protagonist is someone that came to NY looking for opportunities he feels like a standard chinese story MC. Anyways, still okay.CD. Very unlikeable. As I mentioned before, MC Feels like a generic chinese protagonist. Other characters behave irrationally or outright weird several times. US. Very good. Author seems motivated and is pumping those chapters out.WB. It is okay. Author did in fact research abojt the things that he talks about but ghe way people are makes the world background feel weird, destroying the inmersion. Overall a 2,8. As an advice, I would try to avoid chinese cliches and behaviors when writing in a western setting. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] Anyways, have a nice day author.