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dan120364hCommentedA small nuclear blast? Really? So radiation for the Savage Land? Or you tried to say similar to a nuclear blast which still would have killed everyone around.
Despite their best efforts, the enemy forces were overwhelmed by the sheer number and speed of the drones. Some managed to take down a few drones with well-aimed shots of Vibranium-tipped arrows, but it created more problems for them as each drone shot down created a small nuclear blast decimating their ranks further.- dan1203619hCommented
Please he is trying to model himself after Lex Luthor. Of course he is a villain.
Just like the previous Praetorians who had been indoctrinated by him, even with the promise of living like an able person again, he still coerced them. The last thing he needed was to draw the attention of powerful heroes and risk being labeled a villain by them. - dan120361dCommented
It's a different of Vibranium, There is no herb here.
A month had passed since Alex's revelation about the extraordinary herb, within this time he had work as a walking factory, using his new found ability to build complex component that would have taken days to complete, but he had done them in just minutes. - dan120361dCommented
Fury's opinion.
"We will even collaborate with the UN if we have to," Fury added firmly. "I doubt the US military will be happy if they ever find out, but we are SHIELD. We should be the ones with the latest equipment since we are the protectors of this world!" his fist slamming into the table, creating a loud noise that reverberated through the room, showing his resolved. - dan120361dCommented
Not sure how i feel about the mind control. This is straight villain territory. Didn't found cool with the soldiers. If you wanted indoctrination you should have captured criminals and other scum.
"Sky," Alex spoke with a sense of determination, "prepare the five Aerians for indoctrination. I want them to be completely loyal to us so that the information we gather from them is accurate and without blemishes." - dan120361dCommented
It's not the same metal.
The notion that only the strong deserved to rule, while the others were relegated to servitude, clashed with his ideals, though he understands that the strong should be put on the pedestal but those with brilliant mind's should not be left out, this might be one of the main reason as to why this place is so barbaric and lacking in any sort of technology even with a great amount of Vibranium Deposits. As opposed to Wakanda who possesses the same miraculous metal but has already advanced far ahead. - dan120361dCommented
If there are no mutants in the world, how is Sauron a thing here? Maybe Xavier erased everyone's mind and made the world erase all information on mutants then.
In the heart of the Savage Land, a towering mountain loomed, its peak adorned with ancient stone buildings. At the summit rested a grand temple where a huge humanoid Pteron sat upon a throne. This Pteron, known as King Sauron, possessed an unusual green hue, a stark contrast to the typical dark yellow coloration of his kin. Clad in loincloths and fur, the Pterons appeared as savages, their primitive attire belying the intelligence that resided within their vast kingdom. - dan120361dCommented
Savage land vibranium is different from Wakanda's. It's called anti-metal for a reason.
"Emperor," Barret's voice resonated through the comms, his tone a mix of reverence and excitement. "We've found Vibranium deposit, approximately 6000 tons according to scans, maybe more. Requesting further instructions." - dan120363dCommented
MC forgot Warhammer is a game.
To enter the dimension, the children have to change transportation. From the carriages, they board a large sailing yacht, which brings them across the magical stream through the deep forest of magical creatures until they reach the cave of wonder, which contains the Tree of Knowledge. The sailing yacht has many different compartments that fit such a modern yacht. Each compartment fits as many people as they want to stay inside. For those who wish to sleep, there are places for that. The yacht provides the children with almost everything they can hope for, except alcohol and gaming consoles. I don't like those. - dan120364dCommented
Really? And he writes this in books where everyone can read? He is a monster, the least he could do is not to tell people.
Now, 350 years later, I have a much better way to take someone under my control. I have combined magic with microbiology and have created something truly dark. I call it the blood, parasite. This parasite has only one purpose. To infect the erythrocytes, the red blood cells of someone and slowly take all of them under control. It doesn't only infect the erythrocytes, but the specific genome that creates the bloodline of someone. With this, the parasite essentially takes control over a person's bloodline. - dan120364dCommented
Rubik's cube was invented in the forties.
"Of course. He is known as the Rubix Cube of magic. As he has the gift of solving seemingly limitless problems and creating miracles and new things that revolutionise magic or how we understand it." - dan120364dCommentedI offered them a recipe for a rather powerful healing potion, I had created a few years ago and they were very thankful. To their utmost shock, I was able to learn Divination. I really enjoyed this ... for a time and then it got very annoying. I would space out for a time and forget the present, which was not something I enjoyed.
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I wonder if Sean and Raven already defeated everyone on the ship.
"This is where we fight! Where we rage against the collars of our necks! And this is where we shall prevail! Seize your freedom in your hands, comrades! Our oppressors shall know of the same fear and hurt they inflict upon us! - dan120367dCommented
Another story turns into a harem garbage.
(A/N: Okay so because I have expanded this book a lot and want to try one this will be a harem, but no more then three girls. Who have already been picked out, Leah, Rosalie and mystery girl who I will include later. The Harem will be a slow build though to be more realistic to adding them into it, not all at once.) - dan120367dCommented
This is starting to get annoying to be honest. Why didn't you have Rosalie and Emmet like in canon? Useless drama for the sake of drama.
She sat on a tree at the edge of the treaty line, her hearing was supernatural but even from where she sat she could not hear Ryan's voice, it caused her to sigh and look up at the moon. Her chest was in pain as she was far from her mate, she was really hoping that he would come home tonight because at least then she could hear his breathing as he slept, even if Leah stayed with him. - dan120368dCommented
You keep trying to find ways to nerf Infinity. Why did you even bother giving him that?
(A/N: Can Red hurt the user itself in this type of scenario? For example, if Meliodas were to use Full Counter on Red and direct it back at MC, would he be hurt by it? - dan120369dCommented
Why would the devil trap bullet work on Abbadon and not on Alistair?
"Now I'm a bit more confident to fight Alastair, maybe even win, but it's still not an absolute victory, since he didn't fight with full force and just wanted to trap me..." - dan120369dCommented
They didn't meet Castiel yet, how would they know?
Even Castiel, when he came down to earth, received shotgun blasts to the chest, just shaking off the residual dust. Alastair, who was just as strong, would be just as hard, if not harder, to kill than an angel. - dan120369dCommented
Grocery store. Mercenary é mercenário.
Watching the brothers discuss their daily quarrel, Henry sighed wearily and left the inn in the direction of a nearby mercenary.