If Mira becomes an Animagus as a Demon Hybrid there is only one race that can relect that. A species that is selfish and destructive, but makes you love them anyway. A cat.
Falna, not Falena. For misstakes. Question: Does the MC swear a lot? Cause that would half my enoyment when reading. Swearing when something happens is fine, but just swaering to swear is cumbersome and annoying.
Binged this fic in one sitting and quite like it. I personaly wouldn´t mind some time skipping, since from Lucys point of view this world is low power.