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Quan_Poopsalot_721721dCommentedFranca going wil with the lore drops
"You actually did it?" Franca grumbled. "Luckily my Sequence grants strong throat control. I handled it myself. Uh…" Franca suddenly paused. After a few seconds, she said, "Otherwise we'd be seeking a doctor's aid. How embarrassing would that be!"- Quan_Poopsalot_72178mthCommented
Lumian right before literally his entire world is broken.
(End of Volume 1—Nightmare) - Quan_Poopsalot_72178mthReplied to Imaslapurass
the mysterious ruler above the Grey fog...
Lumian listened attentively, realizing that as a wild Hunter, he could only pray to himself in ritualistic magic before knowing the honorific name of the great existence. Where would he find items closely related to a deity? - Quan_Poopsalot_72178mthReplied to visoko
I cannot tell if that is a word or you just spelled black terribly
It was a bundle of black hair containing a few severed fingernails. - Quan_Poopsalot_72178mthReplied to kieran2567a
doesn't Klein not start to wake up until the second half of this book?
Time had rewound to March 29th, a few days before Lent. - Quan_Poopsalot_72178mthReplied to Petty_Vixen
probably what it feels like, he has glorified beyond errors powers for years now
Lumian was no longer as intimidated as he was during their previous encounters. He yelled, "Whatcha looking at? Say something if you dare!" - Quan_Poopsalot_72178mthReplied to Morianse
how does this prove that he is fors though, I would like it to be and all but brown hair is not special and lazy temperaments are not special. Adding onto the Door pathway does make it alot easier to assume, but idk.
Additionally, the enigmatic woman who had bestowed upon him the tarot card was nowhere to be found at the cemetery. - Quan_Poopsalot_72171yrCommented
How bloodshot were they though?
Naroka's hair was grizzled, and her eyes were slightly turbid. She wore a dark dress made of rough cloth, and her hands were covered in a layer of chicken skin with obvious patches on her face. - Quan_Poopsalot_72172yrCommented
4th dimension C.A.D. work
After Leonel learned everything there was to learn about Lesson Three, the next touched on Force Art, and the Lesson after that was titled 'Functional Design'. This Lesson not only taught him basic concepts of design, but, most importantly taught him about drawing blueprints. - Quan_Poopsalot_72172yrCommented
LETS GOO TOLLY IS BACK
Hello loves! I must say that on all of my adventures and travels, I haven't quite come across anything like what I saw in Renewal. Monsters and people? Living together in harmony? You'd think me mad if I told you that, absolutely barking! Nonetheless, as hard as it is to believe, you can trust the word of old Tolly. You begged me to come here and report back to you, and that is what I have done! If you were to doubt me at this point, then you might just hurt my poor old heart, dear reader. - Quan_Poopsalot_72172yrCommented
His closed eyes?
Leonel dashed forward a cold glint in his eyes. - Quan_Poopsalot_72172yrCommented
MORE MORE MORE
· Excerpt from Chapter Three of 'Traveling Tolly in the lands of the Colony' published in the Monthly 'Pangera Gazette' - Quan_Poopsalot_72172yrCommented
mans saw a woman and said
"Erase this weapon from your memory." The man sneered when he saw Aina's gaze. "This mighty Heirloom of the Brazinger family… since when was it the right of a bastard child to wield, let alone the fact this bastard is a woman." - Quan_Poopsalot_72172yrCommented
never enough 😈
[Bonus chapters for 1000 powerstones. THAT'S ENOUGH.] - Quan_Poopsalot_72172yrCommented
this reminds me of ichigo getting his bankai, is that what their called? I never remember
Like a densely packed graveyard, countless spears were dotted across the world. Some of them were broken, others were whole, some had dried blood caking their polearms, while yet others were spotless. - Quan_Poopsalot_72172yrReplied to Awespec[Bonus chapter for 400... next at 600... might as well not be bonus chapters anymore if you guys are getting them as regularly as normal updates >:| *sobs* ]
- Quan_Poopsalot_72172yrReplied to LeoStriker23
but to bring a while engine? that's gotta make some noise right?
This paragraph has been deleted. - Quan_Poopsalot_72172yrReplied to jedlak
personally I think its a mix of both, the mana reconstructed them whilst also storing itself inside them, as they can also experience mana drought. Reading later chapters leads me to thinking that you can't manipulate the mana in other creatures so I don't think this is possible at all
Break through to the other side - Quan_Poopsalot_72172yrReplied to Quan_Poopsalot_7217
So I've finally caught up and what a story man, the hype I felt in the beginning may have been a bit much but it's still a really good read, idea 8/10 I've only ever seen one other book with an idea even close to this so good job. Execution 9/10 it's really good I think though at some points it can feel a tad bit slow. Characters 6/10 really you have the two main characters and so far the other "side characters" really need some fleshing out to make it feel like it isn't just the two currently fighting le French. World building 6/10 Just because so far most of the story is inside the zones which fine that's part of the story, but I really hope the author can give us more details on what else is going on in the world, a really good example of this is like in chrysalis how at the start of some chapters the authors gives little excerpts from book in the world, I'm not saying you have to do that. All in all 7/10 for now and while that seems like the "it's an ok book" range I think I would give most of the books on here a 3-5/10. Final thoughts, maybe flesh out side characters and the main world more and I think that'll really help.