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TheUltBeeseChurger

TheUltBeeseChurger

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2019-12-10 JoinedUnited States
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    TheUltBeeseChurger3yr
    Replied to CHENGchangHANJI

    Thanks for the review! I plan on continuing to release chapters today, so be prepared, I needed time for school and the whole time I was wondering about story ideas, feel free to tell me any ideas you have, I'm always listening to suggestions and reading comments!

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    TheUltBeeseChurger3yr
    Replied to DAOIST222222

    Thanks for the review! As for the next chapter, I will be starting production again today! I needed a short break for school, but now I'm on top of everything and I'm going to continue to make lovely stories!

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    TheUltBeeseChurger3yr
    Replied to CULTIVATOR_3253

    Thanks for the review! I always thought my world-building skills were mediocre at best, thanks for giving me confidence in my skills! I'll continue to write amazing stories to captivate my audience even more!

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    TheUltBeeseChurger3yr
    Replied to BREAK_DOWN

    Thanks for the review! I think you're being too humble by saying its the best fantasy novel out there, but thanks for the compliment! I hope you continue to read, comment, and enjoy!

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    TheUltBeeseChurger3yr
    Replied to DaoistWdqRYY

    Thanks for the review! I planned on taking a short break since school recently started but now that I'm settled back down, chapters are going to come out again today!

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    TheUltBeeseChurger3yr
    Replied to Vladimir_Putin_0006

    Thank you for the review! I had planned on taking a short break since my school year had recently started but I plan on starting uploading again by this coming sunday

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    TheUltBeeseChurger3yr
    Replied to CliffkunLolRekt

    Thank you for the review! I set up the romance at the beginning in a bit of a rush and I think it feels rushed so Im gonna slow it down a bit

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    TheUltBeeseChurger3yr
    Replied to Zoro_The_Dark

    Thanks for the review! Ill be sure to check out your stories in return!

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    TheUltBeeseChurger3yr
    Replied to GodOfDeath1999

    Well, I would like to think he would try something, and that was the first thing that came to mind

    Once he's far enough from the cave for Violet to follow him, he forages for a harder wood or metal to make a spear with. He finds a tree with a branch that looks pretty sturdy, he applies a little bit of force since he doesn't know his own strength with his newly improved body, the branch creaks and but doesn't break. Leon puts a little bit of magic into the branch to straighten it. He then puts more into it to reinforce it with magic. He sighs and figures that should be good enough for throwing but not for proper spearmanship. After making a few more, he uses some of his fur pelts to make a pack and puts the short throwing spears into it. He throws one but he slightly misses his target, he grabs it and throws it again while putting magic into it.
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    TheUltBeeseChurger3yr
    Replied to Nikhil_Chand

    Yeah, I was considering 3d person or 1st person and honestly, I still haven't really decided but I think I should stick to 1st because that explains Leon's thought process and his POV of the story. Thanks for the comment!

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