Review Detail of CliffkunLolRekt in World of Grey

You **** up A good thing you had going by mind wipeing The wifus and bringing that thot from the mcs Old world You completly butured What was making this novel so good I sugjest rewriting from The point he teleported the *****. and have yeet her Off a cliff or something Then precede to use to have him make a artifact that will Fix amnisia You completely ****ed up the romance vibes you had going But most of All for that bit have the mc say to her