AFJDS
Just a guy who spends his days reading either here or in fanfiction mostly. (I also like agressive women, as shown by my pfp, lol).
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AFJDS2dPostedPlenty of good ideas but idk why you decided to suddenly add 10 different cliches in 5chapters. The whole birthday party and pirate part is full of absurd situations brought by stupid decisions and extremely unlikely scenarios. Suspension of disbelief can only take us so far. The main problem is how scatered everything is. The MC is juggling twenty different things at the same time, both women and classes. I know I wrote more about the problems than the qualities but both the power and the world itself is pretty cool and interesting. Idk if the arena thing is common but it’s the first time I’m seeing it and it’s creative.
- AFJDS2dReplied to erebuss
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Well. To be honest, Victoria's chest development is indeed good, at least with a C-cup size, not too big or too small, just right size. - AFJDS2dReplied to Hippo9999
The entrance just teleported from somewhere else. The military blocked it but they probably got there after the goblins attacked, after blocking it for too long it teleported.
This female had probably been captured for several days, tortured beyond recognition. - AFJDS4dReplied to PlutoOmni
Yet the main one was a weapons manufacturer and to my knowledge he never invented anything that wasn’t weapons, hero equipment or for personal use. He could do it but has never mentioned it.
This was the game style with the greatest variation between the price of each model. Being the game with the cheapest Basic model in the store as much as the game with the most expensive Triple A model in the store. - AFJDS11dCommented
If you don’t believe it’s isolated why believe it’s a zombie? Maybe the guy is just not very emotive. Why would it lie? If it wanted for the zombie to infect others it could just make it act normally, no need to trick a rando.
The explanation mentioned that the virus had been isolated. But who knew if that was true? - AFJDS12dCommented
Maybe the cannon fodder will win?!? /satire
"Kael's son Yuto and cannon fodder 1 please come to the stage" - AFJDS12dCommented
*He The description has this mistake too.
This paragraph has been deleted. - AFJDS14dReplied to Mithren
I’m not sure but I think one of them appeared twice, before and after hitting her.
"Both admitted to illegal racing on the Northern Outer Ring Road, betting on who would win Su Manli. The loser would back out. Neither, however, confessed to hitting anyone. - AFJDS15dCommented
No offence to the author but an illegal contract would be useless. He could sign the contract then sue the professor anyway.
This paragraph has been deleted. - AFJDS19dReplied to GGloserzz_69
Uh, I must have read it wrong, lol
This was the game style with the greatest variation between the price of each model. Being the game with the cheapest Basic model in the store as much as the game with the most expensive Triple A model in the store. - AFJDS1mthCommented
They can’t be bothered to put a code for that part?
However, this posed as a great weakness against the ninjas who excelled in assaults. It was because the ninjas could easily avoid the extraordinary warriors and kill the controller, seizing the device and detonating the chip in the extraordinary warriors' heads. - AFJDS1mthCommented
Is it really helping the poor if you get paid for it?
In the federation, South Africa and China had always been on good terms. There were many Chinese who traveled great distances to South Africa to help the poor and to build roads. Therefore, the South Africans were more familiar with their language and accents. - AFJDS1mthReplied to FearedKarma
Yeah but every month has a few more days so generally it’s more like 9months. 10 is a little overcooked.
"Tsk... What rubbish are you spouting!" The woman coughed and chided, "You're the precious son that your mom has spent ten months carrying before giving birth. How can I possibly harm you? This is for your own good. Aren't we just trying to plan your future by finding you a wife from a powerful family? So what if you're made to pick things up? Other people might not get the chance even if they want to!" - AFJDS1mthReplied to Tashady
That is apparently 10000 years of travelling away, through a wormhole that doesn’t exist anymore. He is probably fine, although I guess it depends on how the teleportation works.
The terms of the cooperation were swiftly set. Wine Immortal Overlord would provide Xiye with technological support and some obsolete pieces of equipment. He would even transfer high-quality technical personnel over to help. And in return, Xiye had to provide the Wine Immortal Overlord with 400,000 tonnes of Fire Ant Ores every year at 70% of the market rate. - AFJDS1mthReplied to quality_humor
It’s there
A 90% adaptability rate! - AFJDS1mthReplied to ThePlagueDoctor_8730
Something like martial Honor, maybe? Since it’s trickery instead of conquest. He mentioned it before.
"This is a biological lathe." Maybe because he had tricked these people into becoming his eternal slaves, he felt a little guilt. It was rare for Xiye to be so patient, answering the question, "In this place, I will backup your minds and use cloning technology to backup your original bodies. After that, I will use it to commence the biological modifications. Once your clones die, at the instant your minds shut off, your consciousnesses will be transferred to the backup minds via special instruments. Don't worry, this technology is from the 14th cosmic era, a technology refined by the clockwork magic spirit race from the principle behind the phylacteries of ancient liches. Now after so many years of development, it is already very mature. There won't be any accidents!" - AFJDS1mthCommented
Or burn life’s house down with lemons.
When life gives you lemons make an A-bomb - AFJDS1mthReplied to Good_stuff
Wait! GW made “humans created chaos gods” canon??? It contradicts half the lore and common sense.
Because of my interference, the first three Ruinious Powers didn't come into existence yet. I stopped wars from being fought. Their emergence in the original timeline was the result of the constant warfare amongst humans, the growth of sophisticated early modern nation-states and continued outbreaks of global plagues, respectively. But while there were plagues, I made sure to have someone 'come up' with the solution fast.