Arvolth_Edelweiss
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Arvolth_Edelweiss2yrCommentedunderstatement of the century.
You created such a sly and cold hearted woman, I'm telling you.- Arvolth_Edelweiss2yrCommented
how your sanity hold up?
And mine has its advantages when I die, I won't lose anything, not one bit of my experience nor not one bit of the items I picked up, it meant that everything I had before I died, I won't lose any of it. - Arvolth_Edelweiss2yrCommentedCh 13 CHAPTER XIII (18+)
- Arvolth_Edelweiss2yrCommentedCh 30 29th Move | Hic Sunt Dracones
- Arvolth_Edelweiss2yrCommentedCh 26 25th Move | Space Ambition
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Author, are you sure you're not reading too much wuxia/xianxia novel?
'It's as if he's transformed from an ugly duckling to a gorgeous swan overnight,' was how Kaori judged after comparing Yuuya's old and new looks. - Arvolth_Edelweiss2yrCommented
No need to be humble my friend, you only speak the truth after all.
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They don't even address the issue, what do you expect from wish-fulfilment like that?
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Understatement of the century.
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Probably.
Author Note: Just a question, are breasts size inversely proportional to IQ? - Arvolth_Edelweiss2yrCommented
To be honest I don't think one boost can make that much damage, even if when Cain is not actively blocking it.
Durability: 27500/28000 - Arvolth_Edelweiss2yrCommented
"Since when you were under impression I can't bend reality?"
"Since Yesterday," Blank said, in a flat tone - Arvolth_Edelweiss2yrPosted
Here have some review. The premise is unique enough. Another world due sent to another world withh another dude OP powers to become a little girl familliar. The story is still folowing the OG works but with some spin of author own. Since the story itself is still on its infacy so I won't comment much on that. Try to butcher the paragraph author, its hard to read a full page of words and those dialogue is really killing me. I mean who use this ( -...- ) to write dialogue? Please change it ASAP. The mc is quiet good actually, trying to adapt the situation and not taking a rash decision even he is practically the strongest man in that world, I wonder what will he do in the future? This fic is definietly hold the potential, just wait for it to mature I guess? Hope you continue it and keep up the good work. The fight with Guiche (did I spell his name right?) is really engaging.
- Arvolth_Edelweiss3yrCommentedCh 24 Dragon Master versus The Guardian Expert. (2)
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ask for ophis and big red blood and your life is set for greatness. maybe. probably.
As soon as he was in his room he thought about his overpowered bullshit ability that was 'gifted' to him by the R.O.B. The Legendary Sword is powerful but this is the DxD-verse we are talking about so it might not be enough to proclaim himself as the Sword God-King or any other ridiculous titles. Hell, it might be weaker than Sword Birth in the long haul and that's not even the power of a protagonist just a Sasuke rip-off. The Sword should give him game-like attributes so he might as well check out his stats. - Arvolth_Edelweiss3yrCommented
unleash your inner chuuni young man!
Haruto didn't feel an ounce of embarrassment admitting his inner thoughts. After all, the best character in any story is the mysterious one, right? - Arvolth_Edelweiss3yrCommentedCh 13 Friendly match.
- Arvolth_Edelweiss3yrCommentedCh 5 The License Test
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this is Gold not gonna lie.
"This?" He points to his left cheek, receiving nods from Leona and the horse-girls. "Well, I did... have our school's chairman attending my interview. And during the interview I, well, called her a jailbait. Even got it on the phone too."