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not exactly, there is a possibility that cassie already saw that mordret in the future will know sunnys true name and can enslave him so maybe she did also because she wanted to avoid that fate. and we dont exactly know what cassie saw and how much. Plus between Nephis and sunny, nephis is obviously the correct choice since sunny was to unstable, too cruel, he considered her a burden at the start and cassie knew it. and in case of huge danger while nephis will take risk to fight for cassie, sunny most likely would run away for his dear life...if I was in cassies place, I would have choosen nephis if i could only save one...I dont get why ppl are so mad at her choice like what do u expect?
bro if she did suck off that guy then amon wouldn't have kissed her. .because he read all of that guys memories(that's how he figured out that she wants to be dominated in bed)...think before u comment bro....dont just speed read things, take time to understand what's happening.
no offense, ur suggestion is trash.....saying it like that is just worse...its fine the way it is. Dont give thoughtless criticisms bro
Degenerate nonsense? u really have a pair of rotten eyes if this looks nonsense to u. And bro u have the attitude of a Twitter user. And ur replies are doing nothing but proving the authors point, u force ur opinion on others. Ur replies and comments are very aggressive and toxic...they lack basic human courtesy...and if u are like this in real life...I pity those around u...grow up and learn some manners.
Eren Elijah Edril!? our chad got killed!? unacceptable....those who are fan of "vile evil hides under the viel"...come forward....we have a author to kill..
Exactly!!!
I hope there will be more than one ship that sails....since Lucas just isnt the type of guy who settles for one girl since that would give away too much power and control..instead he feels like the guy who would capture multiple girls and put them against a competition with each other which is heavily monitored and manipulated by him and they dont even know that they are being led him...atleast I hope this won't be one of those stories where only one girl among the many falls for him even after the mc and them having many special moments...those things just feel unnatural...even if u go for only one girl route I hope atleast there will be many girls who fell for him...since that would make the story spicy...
Oh I finally found u....but are u inactive there? I sent quite the long message but u have yet to reply. And did u create a discord server?
Hey author...how about u try translating a novel called "Omniscient First-Person’s Viewpoint"....that novel is great and only has 35 translated chapters....its a great novel...plot, world building, character interaction, depth and the great smart mc...he is just fabulous....so my request is can u translate that story?
ofc it does...nothing he said is worth being creeped out at all.....he is a perfectly normal guy saying totally normal things
How many Chinese novels did u read to have such deep profound understanding of this type of stories!? The depth of ur knowledge terrifies me....
ugh.....dont tell but show it....u are skipping things too much!
author...I need answers....why did u skip the park event? u didnt show us his and the girls time there which was a very important event....skipping it completely destroys the immersion in the story and makes me feel like I am reading a summarized version of the story and leaves me empty...like something is left blank...and u also skipped the part where leon got prompted and his talk with the king...that's just bad writing....which is sad since u were doing so well till now.....
True...it was a dumb move to even suggest this by himself instead of making someone else do it...that was stupid.
No he isnt....this is just a built up, groundwork laying for the future....this kind of build up and set ups are what makes a story deep, realistic and alive....I dont know how u even see this as dragging it out.. since this chapter showered a lot of things and a lot build up that's essential for the future.. so dont just complain unreasonably.
Author,,, Why cant I find ur discord id. I tried the one in ur stories description and it didnt work....and I really wanted to chat with u about this story...so can u give me ur current discord Id and do u have any servers that I can join?
First of all, That guy he caused to commit suicide wasnt a good guy but a bad bully who almost bullied a nerd to suicide. And second of all He isnt feeling guilty...remember how Lucas is obsessed with everything under control? well this just now went beyond his control and now he is frustrated about this since this could mean a lot of things are beyond his knowledge and control.