Your first novel is great but this one is something far more special. The characters are incredible and they live and breathe in such a more realistic way then most novels. I would recommend this to anyone looking for a fantasy novel. If I was criticize anything, occasionally the author explains actions and thoughts of characters when the reader should be able to imply these thoughts based on the characters actions. That is an unbelievably nit picky thing because how do you know that the audience actually understands the characters well enough to not write those statements. The later chapters do much better at not doing this allowing a more natural story flow. 0 Do keep up the amazing work, it is incredible!!!!

This book has the potential to be excellent for a significant period of time. The author seems to understand pacing and it really helps develop the world. Main character has a lot of room for development but he also seems far more realistic MC for a 19 year old. the side characters also have depth to them and also it seems like the author plans to make the side characters have development as well.

how are you this good at writing??? I just get swept away by it everytime.

There is not much to say outside of this is a great book and I highly recommend reading it. The characters and story are incredible. The only thing the may not be incredible is world depth but even then it is still really good.

Please note that I do enjoy her character but that is also why I personally would like to see her grow as a character and this could be in a multitude of ways and some you have hinted out when you wrote about her being shackled. That is why I said it could just be that the story is not written far enough yet. Also, you have done an excellent job so do not let me influence you if it may change how you envision the story. I will continue to enjoy the story pretty much regardless of how it progresses.

This book may not be overly unique in any massive way to others in its genre. However, everything it does is done exceedingly well. The main character has a well developed personality with good interactions with side characters. The setting is great at some points I can visualize the scenes nicely. My biggest critique is that we have more insight and character development of the second and probably third harem members than the first or at least they seem to have more personality. This maybe due to where the story is currently written to but would love to see the first member with more personality and depth.

Great work on 400 chapters!! This arc has been really great so far.

This book has very interesting elements to it. There is some mystery, some twists and turns. I have really enjoyed the experience of reading the book. It does suffer from writing quality issues from time to time. The world background is good but lacks true depth. I rarely feel like I am observing the world as I read it. However, I do recommend reading it as it is an easy read that progresses nicely.

This book is so funny and just an enjoyable read. That brightens my day with every chapter.