Review Detail of kuhl95 in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Your first novel is great but this one is something far more special. The characters are incredible and they live and breathe in such a more realistic way then most novels. I would recommend this to anyone looking for a fantasy novel. If I was criticize anything, occasionally the author explains actions and thoughts of characters when the reader should be able to imply these thoughts based on the characters actions. That is an unbelievably nit picky thing because how do you know that the audience actually understands the characters well enough to not write those statements. The later chapters do much better at not doing this allowing a more natural story flow. 0 Do keep up the amazing work, it is incredible!!!!