Review Detail of kuhl95 in Samsara Online
Review detail
This book may not be overly unique in any massive way to others in its genre. However, everything it does is done exceedingly well. The main character has a well developed personality with good interactions with side characters. The setting is great at some points I can visualize the scenes nicely. My biggest critique is that we have more insight and character development of the second and probably third harem members than the first or at least they seem to have more personality. This maybe due to where the story is currently written to but would love to see the first member with more personality and depth.
Samsara Online
XIETIAN
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Please note that I do enjoy her character but that is also why I personally would like to see her grow as a character and this could be in a multitude of ways and some you have hinted out when you wrote about her being shackled. That is why I said it could just be that the story is not written far enough yet. Also, you have done an excellent job so do not let me influence you if it may change how you envision the story. I will continue to enjoy the story pretty much regardless of how it progresses.
XIETIAN:Thank you for indicating it! I will try to improve as much as possible. However, it is difficult because Xie Yao's character was created to make her more obedient to Xie Feng's wishes. For that reason, she might look more dull.
Don't worry, I won't let the story decline! On the contrary, I will strive to make it better for all of us and yes, I include myself, since I also enjoy reading my novel!
kuhl95:Please note that I do enjoy her character but that is also why I personally would like to see her grow as a character and this could be in a multitude of ways and some you have hinted out when you wrote about her being shackled. That is why I said it could just be that the story is not written far enough yet. Also, you have done an excellent job so do not let me influence you if it may change how you envision the story. I will continue to enjoy the story pretty much regardless of how it progresses.