Great work sad it’ll probably never be finished rating would be higher if not for that as work is well done and while my May seem overshadowed at times I see the potential especially for the time skip. If you want your characte to interact with the main cast and not be overpowered directly then being overshadowed by Tang San is going to happen unless you downgrade him. However the interactions mistakes and character growth is apparen and makes this story quite a fun read for me.

Use transmutation and compas or just appy a blade to your compass….. oh well can’t revolutioniz Enchantment in a single day.

I’l read ahead and give you my opinion. You just want a review of each chapter and any mistakes and plot holes I notice right?

Welcom to The new world your last gen tech is So last dynasty

if you enjoyed this I strongly recommend Douluo-dalu 9 treasured sword

well written thus far, though the level of the writers knowledge of the system seems a bit off at least the reaction of the outside characters seems fine, since the system was absorbing the spirt rings for the host thus seems to circumvent the issue but the mental strain of the backlash of said rings never occurring is something of a let down, the hosts ability to break the game in the first 30 seconds with sword birth is somewhat insulting I feel you could have drawn out it more if you wanted to do something along the purifying you'd did with instead of just giving him a purification in the gotcha witch would have served the same purpose but been less world breaking, as it is the mc doesn't really need the dragon or even really the lotus though having it anyways would be fine I could probably with the restrictions you put on it see the user killing just about anything with just sword birth, I actually somewhat want to challenge the author to dose, with another story except really show the struggle and complexity of having such an adaptable ability as a passive, and how you'd need to actually learn to use different types of swords maybe even reincarnate them and give them a second spirt that is non combatant based and thread that into their skill set. the storey outside of those points is fairly well written, as long as you cam suspend at least some of your beliefs in the power scale of the users, considering most of the spirt masters in the actually series don't seem to have real weapon or combat styles outside of use your spirt it is reasonable to jump at least the smaller power gaps as we see repeatedly through the series with skill and strategy. all in all a good story that keeps its mc not intertwined the the series mc. I look forward to seeing thus continue

stay safe recover well, have faith you aren't planning on dropping it, dose your computer have the application that let's you speak and it writes for you, might be something to look into if you start to get stir crazy

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I'd say he's fine, an attack ability he has he just has to learn how to use them, his rock manipulation can form blunt weapons and his shields can also be used as weapons, now with dimiond body he can use that for defense while the stones can be used for offense, he could also possibly learn how to make his own offensive spirt skill maybe refined manipulation of his stones so he can shoot darts or make swords and spikes, remember just because most spirit masters only have their ring abilities dosent mean that's the only thing that their spirt power can be used for

Well done, interesting variation on the spirit training we've seen before, keep up the amazing work

Great story, keep up the great work, I really enjoy how you've formed the bonds between the characters

Thd control techniques are a thing, in soul land 1 to test the shrecks seven devils he has them try and shatter a bowl with just their soul power, fatty cooks right you could have him work on tring to control his soul power to refine his rock creations to be able to cook with, regulus could attempt to sculp just using star power, i can't remember what spear girl did as a hobby but you could probably make a control technique out of that, the basic Chakra control exercises would seem off but rlental and shape manipulation would be fine for your purposes.

They had shreks devils do it, its used to aid in the creation of non soul ring skills

I enjoy this system very well, well done at showing the powers of the system, was he supposed to be losing money for making the dancer bayblade for Sam's sister i think the numbers might have been off unless it was intentional that he was losing money? Anyways great story egarly awaiting the next chapter, keep writing and ignore the critics.

You guys didn't read the first wish was wishing for more wishes

Good job with the chapters power scaling is interesting but plausible in system, enjoy having an mc whos not just joining the main character, well desined spirits and rings (keep up the good work)

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You can use two spirt abilities at the same time though fusing the rings to combine an strengthen 1 ability is a rare talent up there with twin spirits, i think your discipline of fusing the abilities is fairly unique and might be difficult for someone without training to do so but might still be possible for others