Review Detail of Joshua_Silver in Clear Amber Hammer King: A Douluo Dalu Fanfiction

Great work sad it’ll probably never be finished rating would be higher if not for that as work is well done and while my May seem overshadowed at times I see the potential especially for the time skip. If you want your characte to interact with the main cast and not be overpowered directly then being overshadowed by Tang San is going to happen unless you downgrade him. However the interactions mistakes and character growth is apparen and makes this story quite a fun read for me.