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John_Whitley10mthReplied to RagingDrakewhat anime? is that from?
Lucy got embarrassed and made her way to Lilith quickly and gave her a peck on her cheeks and sat back on her seat obediently. Lilith chuckled and reached out her hand and pulled Lucy's hand and brought Lucy closer towards herself and held her face with both hands and gave her a deep and long loving kiss on her lips. Lucy struggled, clearly wanting to get away from her mother, but alas, she was very weak compared to her mother. Lilith let her go, chuckled and said "Thankyou, dear." Lucy was now fuming with embarrassment but she didn't say anything. She pretended that she didn't like it but the upward curve of her lips gave it away.- John_Whitley10mthReplied to Leandro_Sepulveda
what was that from?
Each race lived on one continent and the other races which were present lived in the continents they see and suitable for them. For example, skeletons, specters, ghouls, fallen angels etc all lived in the demon continent along with the demons. Druids, trolls, orcs and goblins lived along with the Elves in the Elven continent. - John_Whitley1yrCommentedCh 1 Restart
- John_Whitley1yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
- John_Whitley1yrCommentedCh 260 Spellcasters Vs. Swordsmen.
- John_Whitley2yrReplied to John_Whitley
I mean who doesn't from time to time? you have to check on the ppl you care about. lol
This book has been deleted. - John_Whitley2yrReplied to John_Whitley
no problem I just hope you keep up the good work and don't cut out on us. you have some of the best storys on the site in my opinion.
This book has been deleted. - John_Whitley2yrPosted
I swear, I love your writing style. you have the most entertaining battle scenes, action descriptions, and descriptions on the character thought prosses. but the only thing that makes me wonder is if the author is male or female? you seem to have the best storys for both.... I like your female characters, my sister likes your MCs, though she won't admit it, she keeps reading your storys. if you keep going like this you will keep alot of fans.
This book has been deleted. - John_Whitley2yrCommented
this a great story it is sad that its going to another site. not everyone is able to have a membership to multiple sites I don't think its worth it. it would be smarter to have bonus chapters on the other one and keep a steady update here were more ppl will see it
Ch 15 The Unlimited Possibilities I - John_Whitley2yrPosted
The entire primosus of the story is fairly... ok more than fairly unique. a emersive game that not only affects the mc but everyone, granted him more so.. and a game without lvl stats but still extremely interesting.i hope more ppl will read and give stones and gifts to the author so he has to give us more and more. I want to bring the author to his/her knees, begging us to em rest. lol
- John_Whitley2yrCommentedCh 1 I’m Going Ahead First… Don’t Miss Me Too Much
- John_Whitley2yrCommentedCh 1 I’m Going Ahead First… Don’t Miss Me Too Much
- John_Whitley2yrPosted
So far I have to give this a good rating. the game seams realistic but not overly so. My only complaint is just mine. I do not like overly optimistic Mcs. So long as the story progress, and the mc gets a little more down to earth, like when selling the dagger in ch3. I will spend a lot of time keeping track of this story.
- John_Whitley2yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
- John_Whitley2yrCommentedCh 1 Cultivation Online
- John_Whitley2yrCommentedCh 185 Chapter 177: What he gained
- John_Whitley2yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
- John_Whitley3yrReplied to SaraAnn
this is probably the best review for this story. I agree with everything stated. the only thing I might disagree with is update rate. at least for me is a little on the slow side; but wit the rate increase and length of chapters it is getting better. please take in consideration that this is coming from someone who reads as much as possible... pretty much as long as I don't have to focus on any one thing I am reading.