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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah10d
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    I think a better option instead of blood alert would be scarlet alert or crimson alert since you are using colors, I don't see much point in using blood.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3 : The World of Pokemon
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    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah11d
    Commented

    Will Renjiro meet Mito Uzumaki? because considering the timeline, she should be alive for at least another four or five years. I don't speak English so use the translator. I hope it is well-written

    Ch 3 Plan of Action
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    Naruto: Mixed Heritage(Rewrite)
    Anime & Comics · Sidecharacter1
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah16d
    Commented

    Zorieketon

    Ch 1 I'M ...
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    My Researching Journey (HxH)
    Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah3mth
    Commented

    You could give him the powers that Kingpin gave him in the comics (unlucky), if you decide for this you would have to wait at least 2 to 3 years in the future, assuming that shield or iron man takes note of spiderman a connection could be created with dr. Strange to take away Peter's bad luck, this would have a side effect on Felicia making her lose her bad luck ability and gain physical increases (strength, agility, resistance, night vision, etc.),I think this is better than just giving him the super soldier serum. I'm sorry if it's not understood since I don't speak English and I use the translator.

    Ch 57 Chapter 57
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    Spider-Man Mayhem
    Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah6mth
    Commented

    Raiton: Kaminari Shibari and Raiton: Kage Bunshin are in the B rank jutsu category 🧐

    Ch 11 Third Floor (III)
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    Extreme Affinity
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah7mth
    Commented

    Realistically, it should be impossible to unlock even half of Garou's powers. Keep in mind that Garou reached that level while fighting with Saitama and in the world of Naruto it should be impossible to meet someone that strong and you can't reach that level with training alone.

    Ch 4 chapter 3 : status and life [ Edited ]
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    Naruto : The Flow Artist
    Anime & Comics · The_Zen_Boy
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah7mth
    Commented

    I think Itachi is 6 or 7 years older than Sasuke, so if Naruto is 3 years old, Itachi should be 10 years old or so, at that age I think Itachi was already AMBU I think, which would make more sense if the hokage gave him give the mission to itachi (transaltor)

    Ch 1 Itachi
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    Naruto: I Am Uzumaki Naruto!
    Anime & Comics · BorutoIsTrash
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah7mth
    Commented

    Unless I'm bad at math, the protagonist goes back in time to June 2030, the aliens invade in July 2027, that's 3 years since then, you should reread the chapter and correct this and some other minor things, I hope this helps you. (translator)

    Ch 3 Arrivals
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    Re: Apocalypse Game
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah7mth
    Commented

    Can you tell me how to calculate the price of the levels?

    Ch 13 Building a kingdom?
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    Born in apocalypse
    Fantasy · COSMIC04
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah10mth
    Commented

    In the previous chapter you were wrong in the 44/50 experience, which I think should be 34/50, since in the next chapter the protagonist kills a vampire rat and gives him +10 experience, if it were 44/50 it would be level 5

    Ch 6 Evolution
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    Demon's Evolution
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah11mth
    Replied to yashwanth_G

    https://www.panda-novel.com/details/the-human-giant-2070

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    The Human Giant
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah11mth
    Commented

    Have you thought about using chatgpt to edit the chapter and more?

    Ch 90 A party to enjoy? Not for me
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    Zero Fate against the world
    Video Games · Abadom
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah11mth
    Commented

    alexithymia is the inability to express emotions, that does not mean that they do not feel them

    Ch 2 Changes
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    Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah11mth
    Commented

    Has it only been almost 2 days in real life? Speaking of slow novels, this one goes beyond slow. Wow

    Ch 83 Potential over all else
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    Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)
    Games · Follower_of_Abadom
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah11mth
    Commented

    The seed will surely be something like Yggdrasil đŸ€”

    Ch 34 Chapter 34- Three Years
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    The Growth of a Titan
    Eastern · Tsetth
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah11mth
    Replied to Nitrigo

    Name?

    Ch 51 Second Chance
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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah11mth
    Commented

    "Unlike on Terra, where a single day lasted 24 hours, inside the Tower of God, time flowed three times as fast." "Spending an entire Terran day inside the Tower of God is the equivalent of losing over a week of your life!" I think this part is wrong, it says that time passes 3 times faster inside the Tower of God compared to Terra, so it should be 3 days and not 7 (or the time inside is 7 times faster than on Terra, so it would be 7 days inside are 1 outside), I hope it is well explained

    Ch 21 (XXI) The Second Isle
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    God's Tower System
    Fantasy · One_Winged_Angel
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah1yr
    Commented

    (After running the chakra in his path for a few more cycles, Haru stopped) Is this going to be a cultivation novel? Because it feels strange to read that the protagonist's chakra circulates when in the naruto anime they never do those things, the chakra increases with physical training, experience and knowledge as the years go by.

    Ch 5 5
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    Naruto: immortal Ninja
    Anime & Comics · xiaoyasso
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah1yr
    Commented

    Entonces konoha serå completamente destruida en el año 99-100(Boruto capítulo 1)

    Ch 1 Timeline!
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    Naruto: Return of the Uzumaki
    Anime & Comics · ImaChildOfGod
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  • Jannnah
    Jannnah1yr
    Commented

    Tal ves Nie Li(segunda lĂ­nea temporal)no volviĂł al pasado porque el Protagonista cambio el futuro haciendo que Nie Li(primera lĂ­nea temporal) no encontrara el libro o algo parecido

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    TDG: Time-Space Spiritualist
    Anime & Comics · blazuki
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