the start was cliche but decent and the english is good. but the whole story is so on the nose and childish also what's the point of making characters 18 if they act like they are 12, it's obvious it's only for the 18+ tag and because you want to avoid problems there but then you can't write then as adults. Everyone is very childish, the teachers the plot... etc, disapointing that a Holy Necromancer story lost it, you should try to read Grandson of the holy emperor is a necromancer it's very good

I'll add I dropped at chapter 6 but reading now that the author says the story will be more about Romance I feel like this is going to be awful

Sorry I can't, it's really cringe in a lot of ways, first of all Chap 1 starts with just telling us how amazing the MC is, please "Show don't tell" is one of the most basic things, and then the fact every girl is immediately attracted to him it's "a perfect MC who every girl like but likes no girls and even treats beautiful girls like they are just paper because he is such a chad", so cringe, and the sister and mother being infatuated with him, omg.... this is so bad. The world itself might be interesting high world / middle world and then I can see it being interesting with artefacts etc, the English is also pretty good so I give it that, but the story is 2 cringe for me especially for a story that is supposed to be 18+, I can't take it seriously it's like the Japanese MC trope except in here he will get to have sex (I assume since it's 18+). Autor if you see this remove the cringe and the story might be good, I'm assuming the story is decent here since it had some good basics, just take this as a fanfiction first try at writing and then the next book will be great.

does that happen in the novel "dual cultivation"? or any novel you know that seems fun

do not read this absolute thrash 4 years since the first chapter and no grammar has been fixed this looks like the worst MTL you could imagine, any review above 1 is fake or a bot

not* knowing

Greyrat why do I know that name? I forgot help plz

story is good sadly author thinks big dongs is what makes a sceme good, amateur stuff

Cheap Knockoff "God-Like Player in a Game-Like World" really sad that people are calling this creative when the Author of a good story died and this is just a bad copy, shame on all of you

I hope this is a lie, but thank you for the information

the spark os there tho, hence I hope you try again

Disapointing, love necromancer stories, but this is just frustraring to read, I have to force myself to keep going.A lot of the text in the first chapters needs to be editet since their format is wrong, either by mistake or lack of attention.Grammar and tenses are off, quite a few times, fix it.If all of that gets fixed I'd give this a 3, the story is very annoying to read, MC should be a wise 500 yr old demon, feels like a complaining child, clearly Author wants sister to be in Harem, which feels forced, whole things should be re-written

you contradict yourself in this one you say he wants to explore the central continent but a few chapter back he was afraid and wanted to avoid it, either change the text here, or add back there that he was afraid but wanted to explore

ok, now there is a problem he has millions why would hundreds of thousands be a problem?

with time to meet? or with rare free time to meet?

are these system prices or the prices for sale, it's a bit hard to recognise

gateway logistic?

although he is rich, he and his family... you need the comma there

pcs? Pieces? I'm confused

you shouldn't use "always", because it's been what 2 years since he came here, say " Since his reincarnation and system, he had decided he wasnted to establish his own kingdom" makes more sense