Lord_Pendragon
Hmmm Reading is my one true passion or something like thatđ¤?
Writing
of reading
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Read books
can't blame him, I'm not about to die over a stupid battle either
lol, nthn wrong with her pleasuring herself. especially since she's not in a relationship
imp? what's that
are you not used to writing from another characters pov? It doesn't really detract from the story heck i could even be overthinking it, Riel's internal thoughts and monologues feel more natural. for the mom and a few other times for other povs, its's kinda hard to explain but like even though its in 1st person it almost feels a bit too objective like it's a 3rd person observation and they're not the concerned party. man I'm bad at this. basically even though she's talking about the situation that just happened and the state of her body, it almost feels like it's not her. she felt more like a person from Riels's pov. Also, thanks for the chapter, ik writing can be pretty difficult and taxing, especially considering your releases are free.
not her being unaware that she's the only thing keeping the family business afloat right nowđđ
remember they only recently made contact with Eldoria. she's also pretty sheltered despite being so smart so it makes sense why she wouldn't really be all that aware or knowledgeable about things outside of her area of interest which in her case is business and technology
would have been funny to make Jackal some type of dog beast man
on second thought no I'm mistaken
she looks like the orphanage lady from Sword Art Online
any suggestions
I mean someone seeing your lover naked isn't the end of the world. it happens way more often than u think
ngl, I'd make danzo and hiruzen secretly gay
how did u come up with their epithets?
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