this is sad. Aqua's only good features are her powers and looks. she's best used for 'fun'

I like this idea but maybe each time he ranks up you can grant him a template or character summon. some summons could be Uta , Ikaros, Rem, Nico Robin, Orihime, and other cute girls. A good choice for template after graduation would be Rengoku from demon slayer because he is skilled but not beyond special jonin level. scale the template to be roughly 1 or almost 2 ranks higher than his. an example would be that I'm pretty sure shanks and mihawk could take anything below Six paths level, so could many other Shonen characters late game.

what about the other worlds, many are harem anime or just have many beautiful girls. 2 or 3 total will not be enough

the OG copy eyes. sharingan is a rip off

PLOT ARMOUR

I thought the explanation was similar to the Lifestream from ff7

isn't this basically nenekirimaru from Nurarihyon no Mago

yay. I'm glad you're back

not trying to complain but it was hard to understand what was happening in this chapter because Minato, Tobirama, and Obito's names kept being mixed up. do you think it's possible to try and edit this.?

tenchi muyo has so many great girls and the abilities are useful too. war on Geminar also has mechs plus the girls are fun . Kenshi would be nice to replace as his abilities are useful and could help if he ever went to the main tenchi muyo worlds

can you make this be kinda like a yuri harem, please?

I'm looking forward to bulma and blonde launch being in his harem. just try to take the relationships at a reasonable pace and make it both believable and interesting. if you do that you can make your story even better . good job not rushing into a serious relationship with Ahsoka right away.

technically both electrokinesis and magnetokinesis are sub abilities of electromagnetic manipulation. which would be complete control over one of the 4 fundamental forces of nature

I'm concerned about how much the is getting pushed into bad positions . and honestly I think adding stands into the mix might be a bit too much for a first world. but I wish you good luck IRL , too bad I'm not in a position to help, I'm taking care of my 83 year old grandmother and am unemployed so I feel for you

I actually think bulma might be superior because she made a time machine while hiding from the androids and was able, with some help, to reprogram 16

wouldn't something with that weight mess with Earth's rotation or gravitational field

I'm glad you took my suggestion and gave it your own spin. hopefully you don't nerf Mc. and I still believe himiko would be better for Mc's growth , especially as a person, than jiro would. its your choice though

I'm sorry but while the premise is pretty good. the story needs heavy editing because it reads like a poorly translated mtl. if it was edited and read clearly then I'd say it rated at least 3.8 on the lower end

sorry but trying to read this gave me a headache

yay Cortana, beautiful blue Ai waifu. also make sure to include tech from Detroit Become Human , Nier Automata, BioShock, and perhaps prototype and infamous