I do know what it means. There’s a reason why it was written like that. A mind blowing twist.

Thanks for the chapter nice story.

Good story. Waiting for more.

The world building is top notch. Keep up the good work.

Nice development. The issues I found were just my personal preferences. Others might like them though.

This middle finger clich doesn’t suit to Draken’s attitude, I think. This gesture is more suitable for people with kiddy personality. Uh maybe I’m wrong about Draken.

He’s arrogant here and I don’t know what he will gain in acting that way. I hope there’s a reason for this action and not just ’he’ being cocky.

So far so good especially the world building

Nice chapter

He’s Subaru of re zero?

Very nice first chapter

Finally someone who pointed out error. Thanks for this. I’ll fix immediately.

Awkward conversation is reality.

No fix time so far because I haven’t finish with my outline. I will announce in the review section once I do.

Yes, this is a rewrite. This novel is part of the faceslapping contest a couple of months ago, though it only won 3rd place.

Everyday so far

Haven’t reach this point of editing yet. But thanks for pointing out. The first version of this novel is I’m using qi as power source but later I change it into mana. Don’t worry i will fix it.