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Fhrutz_D_Hollow

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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
    Fhrutz_D_Hollow6mth
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    Ch 283 He faced the wrong person
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    I know, I know鈥擨 sounded like some mustachioed villain from a daytime TV drama about to lure the beautiful damsel into some dark corner of the tower so I could have my way with her. But that wasn't my intent, and I think Liara could sense that.
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    I do know what it means. There鈥檚 a reason why it was written like that. A mind blowing twist.

    The Valhalla of Death - This was how they described that war.
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    Thanks for the chapter nice story.

    Ch 11 A Not-So-Indecent Proposal, Part 2
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    Good story. Waiting for more.

    Ch 10 A Not-So-Indecent Proposal, Part 1
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    The world building is top notch. Keep up the good work.

    Ch 8 Tower of Tomfoolery, Part 1
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    Nice development. The issues I found were just my personal preferences. Others might like them though.

    Ch 7 Rivals, Part 2
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    This middle finger clich doesn鈥檛 suit to Draken鈥檚 attitude, I think. This gesture is more suitable for people with kiddy personality. Uh maybe I鈥檓 wrong about Draken.

    "Work hard, human." He turned around and waved his middle finger at me. "I'll play with you when you've proven your worth."
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    He鈥檚 arrogant here and I don鈥檛 know what he will gain in acting that way. I hope there鈥檚 a reason for this action and not just 鈥檋e鈥 being cocky.

    "Where are you going?" I asked. "Don't you want to play with me first?"
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    So far so good especially the world building

    Ch 6 Rivals, Part 1
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    Ch 3 Extra Life
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    Nice chapter

    Ch 3 Extra Life
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    He鈥檚 Subaru of re zero?

    Ch 2 Crucible, Part 2
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    Very nice first chapter

    Ch 1 Crucible, Part 1
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    Finally someone who pointed out error. Thanks for this. I鈥檒l fix immediately.

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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    Awkward conversation is reality.

    Ch 5 A freak on another level
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    Replied to G0d_4174

    No fix time so far because I haven鈥檛 finish with my outline. I will announce in the review section once I do.

    Ch 20 Rivals
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    Yes, this is a rewrite. This novel is part of the faceslapping contest a couple of months ago, though it only won 3rd place.

    Ch 18 The first match
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    Everyday so far

    Ch 12 The guests
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  • Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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    Haven鈥檛 reach this point of editing yet. But thanks for pointing out. The first version of this novel is I鈥檓 using qi as power source but later I change it into mana. Don鈥檛 worry i will fix it.

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