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it would be so much more interesting if Earl was aged up. it would make his interactions less weird to imagine since he's supposed to be 7. O would be more invested in his escapades if he was in his teens already, then what he does with his mom would be less weird to picture
something has been bothering me about the story, it hadn't even been a month since she first woke up on this world and she already has a kingdom and an army? shouldn't she have started small first with a town before getting more people and developing her territory? and where did 500 people come from, she had about 80 total at the start before the fire harpies joined, sorry if i sound ranty, it's just suddenly realized that it progressed way too quickly .
Thanks for the chapter. It's really great. I sense new troubles coming her way, and this heavenly commandments seem like assholes, who says they want to behead someone while they burn their family alive? Aren't they supposed to be the good guys? Im also looking forward to seeing her meet the other sins