It could be a good read and it does start out okay but you can start see the numerous grammar mistakes as the chapters go by. To me it seems the author had no idea where the novel was going to go, how his mc’s personality would be and how the world back ground would pan out. The only thing he knew was to make his mc be an open pervert. We get no world back ground, no information on the mc before or after transmigration. The only world background we get is the power level, and that the world evolved and that’s it. The chapters themselves are about 6-7 pages which is extremely short and a page per chapter is just for all about the system info and his “stats.” My only advice for the author would be to Prepare more. Instead of going straight into making a novel with only an idea of a story it might be better to actually write notes, brainstorm some more and actually put time into your story. It’s obvious how little thought process was involved once your mc showed up. Good luck
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