Yeah sometimes it takes so long to get anything resolved in this book. This chapter had nothing to it. Just another hanger.

Learned something new today, apparently opportunity is two words. The fact it looks like one is just an illusion. There is no spoon.

What happened to the whole chapter explaining how Grandmasters cannot sneak up on each other. Now every grandmaster and their grandmaster mothers can sneak up and move without notice.

Ok so now he is just stupid and arrogant??

Didn’t loot the thief.

Things are not well explained in this book. I don’t know how much of it is translation or author.

He just got done yelling at the world he will steal everything. And now he is upset with the idea??

‘Available races that is available’ that is just a horrible set of words. Lol First, just say available once. More than that is redundant. Second, ‘races’ is plural. Plural words use ‘are’ instead of ‘is’. Could have just said ‘the available races’ or ‘the races that are available’

S, B, and SS? Kinda weird lettering scheme

Note to author, the camp setup was poorly explained so it made it a weird to follow the battle. You explain closing the camp gates. What gates? We’re there walls? Was the river blocked at all? Sometimes details help create a better picture for the reader allowing them to be immersed more. As it is now it feels a bit choppy and that I am just be told things.

Did he yell this or think this? Maybe use ‘ for internal thoughts otherwise your internal monologues are confusing at times.

One of the most simple minded MCs I have had the misfortune of reading. By chapter 10 I had already had enough, And can’t continue. The writing feels like reading a list, that often has way too much detail. Thinking this was a brand new author I wanted to give it and the author some time, but upon learning this isn’t their first work I figured it won’t get any better.

Why does the author make the MC so horrible?

Wait this author has written a novel before?? Then why is the writing so bad. I was giving the author some credit, because I thought he was new at this.

‘A few ways’ implies more than one. Kill creatures is one way.

Yeah, I think this is too much detail. Unless it was to point out that he used a turn key ignition in an IVR level tech world.

Does he seriously have to shout evrything? It’s like you took the worst trope of anime and added it to a web series.

No one cares about his opinion since he hasn’t said more then 2 words in the first 20 chapters. I tried to keep reading, but there is nothing that makes me want to continue.

I really don’t get the main character. And I am already bored. Sorry, but time to try something new.

Seriously I don’t think the author knows anything about kids. My daughter is 3 and has full blown conversations and is able to express her interests and desires. Either the author is making rain a retard, or they are doing the whole ‘I have to hide everything from everyone, even my parents, and even if it is to my own detriment’