why not alchemist it makes more sense as a class name than alchemy

author could you explain why he doesn't hug his 'parents' when he leaves.i mean if he doesn't do it because he don't want to hurt them since jedi can't see they're family I can understand but like can you atleast give his thoughts and processes when that situation happen. it urk me the wrong way, sorry. Anyway, it's an interesting story so far.

my dude you can't just write that and say anyway after.....bruh😐

bruh seriously 😐

thank God you didn't made her fall in love on the spot.you are blessed for that.i am so tired of superficial relationships and harem on this app.

wtf do you mean nice grammar.the grammar isn't nice at all.

I see you speak the language of my people

I mean your race does enslave other races sooooo yea😐

why don't you like Mikasa?

this is better then 99% of the fanfics in this app thank you for making this and goodluck.

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mc:

mahoraga: my son

dude there are so many other characters that say that

please no it is so weird to gender bend the main character of a show/book because you want your fanfic character to bang him.*that's my opinion

mating press*

the robots are for all threats, so technically it wasn't for him he was just unlucky he was a threat that needed the scout.😅

it's giving me the same vibe.... dun dun duuuun

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oof😐