Thanks for uploading chapters. :)

Characters are bad. Mechanics and grammar are far poorer than an average 6th grader. Worldbuilding: nonexistent. Dialogue: dumpster fire.

im looking for the actual one but its hard to find.

This unfortunate novel somehow got into my crosshairs. I mean, if it was good, it shouldn’t have anything to fear. However, it just isn’t. Not at all.

Alright ill try to find the raws aGain

I forgot to mention this, but paltry == a small amount

exactly 😔

“Yo Strongest, what’s up?”

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Writing and characters remain lackluster even past the early chapters. ********************************************************************

I don’t like it but I don’t hate it either. The novel is indeed humorous and contains well-written characters. By the way author, the boasting in the description makes me feel cringe.

It used to be here on the novel page but webnovel removed it.

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Thanks for responding! I guess the last two criticisms would be summed up with me just feeling that some parts of the novel has become repetitive. Because of that, I like the addition of the auction house chapters, which are new and exciting. I did notice that the errors were lower in later chapters, but errors in the first few can stop someone from reading. I do still enjoy this novel, so keep up the good work.

Constructive Criticism: Please develop you characters. Not one real ounce of character development has been bestowed upon most side characters. Please get an editor, or use Grammarly to reduce errors that detract from the text. Flesh out the systems more, his goal is to get stronger rather than wealthier. For me: premise good, writing not so much.

Its w w w instead of ***

Sorry about that: https://***.dongliuxiaoshuo.com/book/CABWBQc.html

bro ur reading the wrong one there’s literally only 8 chapters

foolish