Review Detail of iMM in Supremacy Games
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Constructive Criticism: Please develop you characters. Not one real ounce of character development has been bestowed upon most side characters. Please get an editor, or use Grammarly to reduce errors that detract from the text. Flesh out the systems more, his goal is to get stronger rather than wealthier. For me: premise good, writing not so much.
Supremacy Games
MidGard
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Thanks for responding! I guess the last two criticisms would be summed up with me just feeling that some parts of the novel has become repetitive. Because of that, I like the addition of the auction house chapters, which are new and exciting. I did notice that the errors were lower in later chapters, but errors in the first few can stop someone from reading. I do still enjoy this novel, so keep up the good work.
MidGard:1) Side-Character development is indeed lacking and I will do my best to work on it. 2) I don't know which chapter you reached, but in the latest 100 chapters, the mistakes are at the bare minimum. Though, I agree that I need to proofread the rest. 3) Don't know which systems are you talking about, the bloodline Integration system, the elemental system, or others? Because for the integration system by the latest 100 chapter, I doubt anyway is having an understanding of it. At least what Felix current integration at. As for the elemental system, I can't flesh it out really when Felix is still discovering it on his own by training in it. As for others, please write them down. 4) I don't understand what you mean by Felix needs to get stronger, not wealthier? Because as far as I have been writing, Felix's biggest issue to his strength isn't practicing but his lack of wealth that causes him to not buy enough primogenitors essence. Not to mention, buying elemental potion and other resources. Lastly, the UVR had mostly everything that he needed to be purchased for now, so why I don't understand how is wealth not related to strength in this case...At least in the current state of the novel. Oh, if you are implying his elemental Manipulation, I have written that he is spending 3 hours a day to practice it and I simply don't want to write every little progress that he makes in it. When he reaches a hurdle or a milestone in the system, I will most definitely write it. but others? I will not since they are just fillers. Sorry if my answers were misinterpreting your questions since I don't know which chapter you have reached. Thank you for the criticism! Most appreciated! truly UwU!
1) Side-Character development is indeed lacking and I will do my best to work on it. 2) I don't know which chapter you reached, but in the latest 100 chapters, the mistakes are at the bare minimum. Though, I agree that I need to proofread the rest. 3) Don't know which systems are you talking about, the bloodline Integration system, the elemental system, or others? Because for the integration system by the latest 100 chapter, I doubt anyway is having an understanding of it. At least what Felix current integration at. As for the elemental system, I can't flesh it out really when Felix is still discovering it on his own by training in it. As for others, please write them down. 4) I don't understand what you mean by Felix needs to get stronger, not wealthier? Because as far as I have been writing, Felix's biggest issue to his strength isn't practicing but his lack of wealth that causes him to not buy enough primogenitors essence. Not to mention, buying elemental potion and other resources. Lastly, the UVR had mostly everything that he needed to be purchased for now, so why I don't understand how is wealth not related to strength in this case...At least in the current state of the novel. Oh, if you are implying his elemental Manipulation, I have written that he is spending 3 hours a day to practice it and I simply don't want to write every little progress that he makes in it. When he reaches a hurdle or a milestone in the system, I will most definitely write it. but others? I will not since they are just fillers. Sorry if my answers were misinterpreting your questions since I don't know which chapter you have reached. Thank you for the criticism! Most appreciated! truly UwU!