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Guys, this FanFiction is actually a shameless copy of a fanfic that already exists here, which is called: "An Empire of Ice and Fire" but it is incomplete here, with only 87 chapters on this site, you can find the rest on the internet using the same title as I mentioned or through this link: https://m.fanfiction.net/s/12697120/1/An-Empire-of-Ice-Fire
I loved the idea of Jack in One Piece, if you could also put his compass in this work it would be incredible, I hope this wonderful work continues
so I have an idea that you can put in your story, there is a character in the history of the French revolution called Joseph Boulogne Chevalier de Saint-Georges, there is even a film that tells his story “Cheveliere” which is very good. He was very important for the period before the French revolution and during the revolution, his history was erased by Napoleon, but resentfully his history is being rescued, he was commander of a brigade made entirely of black soldiers, there are many things that were lost because of Napoleon, who restructured slavery later in French history.
so I have an idea that you can put in your story, there is a character in the history of the French revolution called Joseph Boulogne Chevalier de Saint-Georges, there is even a film that tells his story "Cheveliet" which is very good. He was very important for the period before the French revolution and during the revolution, his history was erased by Napoleon, but resentfully his history is being rescued, he was a commander of a brigade of only black soldiers, there are many things that were lost because of Napoleon who restructured slavery later in French history.
the author so I wish you could put the MC's encounter with his sister, the one who appears in the last season of Lucifer's show!
so my opinion about your fanfic is that it is good, but it has a lot to improve. I've seen a lot of people talking bad, but I think they're exaggerating, because if they don't like it they wouldn't be reading the chapters and honestly I think what you're showing is the MC's personality is very cool, but it needs improvement, because you put it as passive in a lot of cases, but I don't know what you have in mind in the next few chapters, but I want to give some advice it doesn't make the MC have a Harem because I think that sort of thing is too far-fetched, especially in worlds that it doesn't have bigamy, like Harry Potter.