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JSirMixalotL4hReplied to RustyBoimaybe the author thinks earth population is in the millions and not billions
[For those of you who don't know what I'm saying, this battle took place in a game called Minecraft! This is a game that is becoming quite popular around the world, to the point that during the attack on the city of Hypixel today, several stores around the world closed so that the owners could battle and defend the beloved city. ]- JSirMixalotL1dCommented
Is this a cultivation novle? Genin, Chunin and Jonin are job ranks and although they have a minimum strength requirement they have no upper limit. So he could say with his strength he has the qualification to be chunin (or jonin or whatever) but that doesn't mean he could defeat every genin. Remember, Naruto was a genin till the end of the 4th war.
"Now, in my normal state, I should be at the Elite Chuunin level, and in the triple acceleration state, I could be considered a Tokubetsu Jounin, there are three directions if I want to become stronger..." - JSirMixalotL1dReplied to AvgNovelReader
He was undead and had unlimited chakra, there is no relation to his chakra reserves when he was alive. But since he spammed Flying Thunder and Rasengan like they're going out of style his chakra reserves were definitley not low
However, when he thought about it, as long as the strength gained momentarily is strong enough, even if he had physical endurance issues, there was no problem, just like Minato, who was able to assassinate fifty Jounins in a matter of moments, even if his amount of chakra was not much, that did not stop the fame of the Yellow flash of Konoha from shaking the entire ninja world. - JSirMixalotL1dCommentedPondering for a moment, Li Xiao finally spoke, "Bing Shuang, from now on, your title will be Ice Frost Venerable. How does that sound?"
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It would be helpful to inform the reader when the POV switches back
The moment the horn blared, I plunged into the icy depths of the Black Lake. The shock of the cold water was immediate, stealing my breath and sending a jolt of adrenaline through my veins. But the runes, humming beneath my skin, pulsed with a reassuring warmth, a counterpoint to the chill that threatened to engulf me. - JSirMixalotL1dCommented
I feel like I read that exact same part a few chapters ago...
Blaise rolled his eyes. "You sound like my grandfather, Greengrass. Always banging on about hard work. As if life were meant to be all toil and no pleasure." - JSirMixalotL3dCommented
why are you calling it flow? i think energy would be a bette word
After meeting Ikkaku and his group, Itachi decided to be a little experimental with the sword and once more started letting the flow inside his body move into the sword. - JSirMixalotL3dReplied to 2312_Haemsky_2312
only because of old age. None of them have white hair when younger
Chapter 2: The Rain Find Her Sky - JSirMixalotL7dReplied to grimscarlet153
it's like going back in time to the 2nd world war and moving from argentine to berlin while saying it would be bad luck if he would get affected
If he gets involved in the battle between them, At that point, he can only blame himself for being unlucky. - JSirMixalotL24dCommented
Luck has nothin to do with that. Instead of going there for a weekend or check the enlistened students online he just went all in and moved there
If he gets involved in the battle between them, At that point, he can only blame himself for being unlucky. - JSirMixalotL27dCommentedCh 285 Chapter 285 - Orochimaru: Path from Light to Dark
- JSirMixalotL1mthReplied to _NorthStar_
Kakashi said Naruto (after graduating) has 4 times his chakra and with Kurama (loose seal) more than 100 times
HP: 4130. CP: 10755 - JSirMixalotL1mthReplied to DouLewZell_0106
Yeah he confuses quite a few names
Add to that Obito, who graduated a long time ago. These few people already include most of Konoha's main future forces. - JSirMixalotL1mthCommented
What kind of breakthrough is that? His chakra is tailed beast level and he knows more ninjutsu than Hiruzen. He was only lacking experience from the start and he didn't get any
After all, it was the result of relentless training for over two months, entirely different from any rewards provided by the system. Although the next breakthrough was still a long way off, Asahi now had some confidence. - JSirMixalotL1mthCommented[A/N: Yes it's probably similiar to what you are thinking. Get Over Here!]
- JSirMixalotL1mthReplied to KK9494
- JSirMixalotL2mthCommented
I would advise you to think about a different intro. Every chapter starts the same way and invites the reader to skip the first 2- paragraphs
At the edge of the pit full of water sat a person who looked around twelve, his brown light brown hair soaked with sweat and his hazel eyes full of focus. - JSirMixalotL3mthPosted
I only read till chapter 34 so maybe it gets better later. To his first quest (around chapter 20) you could easily fit everything in 3 chapters. Introduction, joining the chat group, girls fawning over him and him blushing from every interaction with a girl. After getting the first quest you can add lemons and him acting like the MC of the original work. I hoped it would get interesting with the world travel but so far it doesn't and i can't keep reading the same shit every chapter
- JSirMixalotL3mthCommented
Since he wants to marry every beautiful girl he sees or hears about he actually is...
"Don't worry. I won't. I know what sort of person you are. You're not someone who only thinks with his dick. The fact that you won't buy that skill that'd let you control your sperm fertility is all the proof I need. You'd only have sex with the girl you'd want to marry, and that is one of the reason why I fell even more for you."