The fan fic is good. The problem is the incest. Like seriously. Everything was going great. Over protective brother. Sad sister. Unique powers and building up to be OP. All of a sudden he kisses his sister. It’s just gross. Don’t read if you have morals.

Yea I’m gonna need context here… where does this make you think he enjoys watching his close ones getting railed by someone that is not him? Also no… just no.

This fic is great I just wish there were more chapters!

Exactly! But if you think about it the less the system just gives you the stronger it might be!

Interesting but that is not how this fic will go.

He already died once. Why not get as much benefits as possible in this life. Be open and get all the help he can right?

He’s a part of shield now and her partner. Can’t trust someone with your life if your not open

Where? I keep an updated tracker for stats and they have only gone up. the stat points themselves are lower but thats because those are free stats for him to assign.

Dont forget bonuses for missions. The 240k a year is litterally to sit around and do nothing. He will get more but this is also in 2007 and 240k is A LOT of money back then.

Would you mind letting me know what did it? Is it the fact that the character is open about his ability? I understand if it is not for you I’m just curious is all. Either way have a great day!

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