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Daniel_Francolin

Daniel_Francolin

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2019-05-03 JoinedGlobal
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  • Daniel_Francolin
    Daniel_Francolin1yr
    Replied to Jironimo_Ross

    Seems like author has own game definitions.

    [No, but if someone duels with you for the title and you lose the battle, you will lose the title too.]
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    The King's Mandate: Anomalous System
    Games · NoWoRRyMaN
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  • Daniel_Francolin
    Daniel_Francolin1yr
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    Hi! For those who want to read this….. let me tell you now THE AUTHOR FUCKED UP THE NOVEL!!!!! Damn! The novel became 3 stories in 1 novel! They just have the same character name with absolutely no connection with the other stories except for having same universe! The first story is about Lei Lou being OVERPOWERED! This story’s plot is like Lei Lou cultivates to higher mage tiers to defeat the enemy and then he will discover that there are much stronger people than him and this just kept repeating. Harem is decent enough. Don’t complain about the age gaps they literally can live for thousands of years it doesn’t matter. The ending is just Lei Lou discovering the Divine Sparrow Pearl(Chapter.244) and then after that on chapter 245 he’ll be in a new world created by him with the pearl. Second story is him being a GOD OF CREATION. Creating goddesses, creating life and then exploring the world he created. Conflict here is about him dealing with his heart of darkness. Harem plot too. Decent enough. Absolutely no connection with the first story except for it being the pearl. It ended with him feeling lonely and something missing in him that’s why he reincarnated! Third story is about him being a STRATEGIST! Yes he explained in the second story that because he’s too overpowered and he can do everything he can’t develop cunningness and being a smartass. He doesn’t remember anything from the second story because it doesn’t have any connecting with it. In this story Lei Lou trained his mind from birth then he experience military life(him being commander and conquering cities) then it ended with him saving the world and getting the flower to cure the girl he likes. YES! FUCKING YES! IT AIN’T HAREM NO MORE! DAMN! One girl that he likes turns out to be a sword spirit so she sacrificed herself and gone forever. ABSOLUTE BULLSHIT! FUCK! IT DOESN’T MAKE ANY FUCKING SENSE! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS?! YOU BASICALLY DISCARDED ALL THE WOMEN THAT HE GOT AND PROCEEDED WITH ANOTHER STORY YOU DIDN’T EVEN ENDED THE STORIES PROPERLY! IT’S NOT A NOVEL ANYMORE IT’S MORE LIKE A COMPILATION OF 3 STORIES WITH THE SAME CHARACTER GETTING REINCARNATED. FUCK! ONE OF THE MOST FUCKED UP STORIES I HAVE EVER READ! UNTIL 245 EVERYTHING WAS COOL I WAS ENJOYING THE STORY YET YOU FUCKED UP THE WHOE NOVEL BY DOING THIS SHIT! SO FUCKING DISAPPOINTING!

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    Sign In: Becoming A Great Spell Deity Starting From The Magic Academy
    Fantasy · Dr.Boom
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  • Daniel_Francolin
    Daniel_Francolin1yr
    Replied to BlackFlamer

    Thank you author! But don’t force yourself if you have other novels to update! You really did a great job in your novels and I appreciate and enjoyed the entire adventure! Keep up the good work and keep working towards your dreams! ^___^

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    Harem Overlord
    Eastern · BlackFlamer
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  • Daniel_Francolin
    Daniel_Francolin1yr
    Posted

    Great! Fucking great author! You’ve done justice HAHAHA! You’ve included all of the potential harem members(except for those with not so much development) and gives me great satisfaction! You’ve even added Monica to his bed and Milkyona HAHAHAHA! Great! Though it’s a pity Yvonne wasn’t in the harem but there’s reasons for that! So great author! Keep up the good job!

    altalt
    I like them big, do you?
    Games · Sixth
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  • Daniel_Francolin
    Daniel_Francolin1yr
    Posted

    Very good harem story! But you forgot Rias! The demon empress! Where is she author! And you didn’t even mention the names of the archangel wives that he has, You didn’t mention End being in the final session that they have and her children. Besides, in the beginning of the story, you mentioned that he has more than 40 wives, not including the new ones, so who are they and where are they author? And as the greatest being in his universe, Kai should be able to revive the dead ones including Lana and Kana, which just died years after he came back. It should be possible for him to fish them up in the river of time(I added this assuming there should be one). It is really a very good story and very exciting to see Kai rise up from the mortal realm to the highest realm he could reach but you could have made a better epilogue mentioning all of his wives and not forgetting a single one of them. Pleaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeee!!! Make epilogue 2.0 for the forgotten wivesssss.

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    Harem Overlord
    Eastern · BlackFlamer
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