Very good harem story! But you forgot Rias! The demon empress! Where is she author! And you didn’t even mention the names of the archangel wives that he has, You didn’t mention End being in the final session that they have and her children. Besides, in the beginning of the story, you mentioned that he has more than 40 wives, not including the new ones, so who are they and where are they author? And as the greatest being in his universe, Kai should be able to revive the dead ones including Lana and Kana, which just died years after he came back. It should be possible for him to fish them up in the river of time(I added this assuming there should be one). It is really a very good story and very exciting to see Kai rise up from the mortal realm to the highest realm he could reach but you could have made a better epilogue mentioning all of his wives and not forgetting a single one of them. Pleaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeee!!! Make epilogue 2.0 for the forgotten wivesssss.
BlackFlamer
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LIKEThank you author! But don’t force yourself if you have other novels to update! You really did a great job in your novels and I appreciate and enjoyed the entire adventure! Keep up the good work and keep working towards your dreams! ^___^
BlackFlamer:all right, all right. if I find the time, I'll create separate side story chapters focusing on the forgotten or less mentioned ones
Daniel_Francolin:Thank you author! But don’t force yourself if you have other novels to update! You really did a great job in your novels and I appreciate and enjoyed the entire adventure! Keep up the good work and keep working towards your dreams! ^___^