Review Detail of Daniel_Francolin in Sign In: Becoming A Great Spell Deity Starting From The Magic Academy

Hi! For those who want to read this….. let me tell you now THE AUTHOR FUCKED UP THE NOVEL!!!!! Damn! The novel became 3 stories in 1 novel! They just have the same character name with absolutely no connection with the other stories except for having same universe! The first story is about Lei Lou being OVERPOWERED! This story’s plot is like Lei Lou cultivates to higher mage tiers to defeat the enemy and then he will discover that there are much stronger people than him and this just kept repeating. Harem is decent enough. Don’t complain about the age gaps they literally can live for thousands of years it doesn’t matter. The ending is just Lei Lou discovering the Divine Sparrow Pearl(Chapter.244) and then after that on chapter 245 he’ll be in a new world created by him with the pearl. Second story is him being a GOD OF CREATION. Creating goddesses, creating life and then exploring the world he created. Conflict here is about him dealing with his heart of darkness. Harem plot too. Decent enough. Absolutely no connection with the first story except for it being the pearl. It ended with him feeling lonely and something missing in him that’s why he reincarnated! Third story is about him being a STRATEGIST! Yes he explained in the second story that because he’s too overpowered and he can do everything he can’t develop cunningness and being a smartass. He doesn’t remember anything from the second story because it doesn’t have any connecting with it. In this story Lei Lou trained his mind from birth then he experience military life(him being commander and conquering cities) then it ended with him saving the world and getting the flower to cure the girl he likes. YES! FUCKING YES! IT AIN’T HAREM NO MORE! DAMN! One girl that he likes turns out to be a sword spirit so she sacrificed herself and gone forever. ABSOLUTE BULLSHIT! FUCK! IT DOESN’T MAKE ANY FUCKING SENSE! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS?! YOU BASICALLY DISCARDED ALL THE WOMEN THAT HE GOT AND PROCEEDED WITH ANOTHER STORY YOU DIDN’T EVEN ENDED THE STORIES PROPERLY! IT’S NOT A NOVEL ANYMORE IT’S MORE LIKE A COMPILATION OF 3 STORIES WITH THE SAME CHARACTER GETTING REINCARNATED. FUCK! ONE OF THE MOST FUCKED UP STORIES I HAVE EVER READ! UNTIL 245 EVERYTHING WAS COOL I WAS ENJOYING THE STORY YET YOU FUCKED UP THE WHOE NOVEL BY DOING THIS SHIT! SO FUCKING DISAPPOINTING!