Ayries_Jesea
Hi I am Ayries.I like novels about reincarnating, I'm more into fanfics now those self inserts.I like MC that are op but they didn't receive everything in just one Chapter.
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Ayries_Jesea1dReplied to Sword_daoist19I said 2 or 3
It wasn't the princess who I was kind of expecting to be there. Since she currently isn't present, she was probably in her private quarters with the Head Maid tending to her. With what has been going lately, losing one's parents at only one year old...fate can be rather cruel sometimes. I wonder, did her grandmother inform the princess of the news yet, or is she still waiting for her parents, only to never come home?- Ayries_Jesea7dCommented
I know that you are still putting the pieces's for a plot but I really hope that we would see more of the mc action. It's been to rarw for him to appear in the last chapter and he just briefly appear
A clue about his most sought-after prize was mentioned in one of those planets and his direct underling that was sent to that planet relayed the clue. Through contact with Intergang, Earth became known to him but now... Earth earned the curiosity of Darkseid. - Ayries_Jesea7dCommented
this just go from bad to very bad, to very very bad and I feel like it will still go Plus Ultra very bad
A clue about his most sought-after prize was mentioned in one of those planets and his direct underling that was sent to that planet relayed the clue. Through contact with Intergang, Earth became known to him but now... Earth earned the curiosity of Darkseid. - Ayries_Jesea9dCommented
How ,its long skirt
She continued to explain where the classes would take place, the location of the dormitories, and the various rules that should supposedly be respected. I just followed her behind and kept looking at her jiggling ass while she swayed her hips gracefully with each step. There was also one time when she bent down to pick something up from the floor, and you could perfectly see the valley between her buttocks and the outline of her panties. I want to squeeze it so badly… Why am I feeling so horny? Is this a sign of puberty? - Ayries_Jesea11dCommented
Although a bit weaker than most of anime characters. This guy is still strong, around high class probably. But I think his best ability is his ability to connect to his parallel self i think. I already forgot majority of the lore of hitman reborn.
|Randomizing White Haired Template…. Congratulations! You get Byakuran (Katekyo Hitman Reborn)| - Ayries_Jesea13dCommented
That name made me remember a messed up h-anime haha
"Yeah, I call it Euphoria," I replied, concealing my internal embarrassment. - Ayries_Jesea21dCommented
How ironic, a devil doing some weird ritual to summon some demonic being to do something for him. hahaha
A gaunt hooded figure formed in the Magic Circle. The Harvestor was a magical entity formed and summoned from the Spirit Realm, but some believed him to be the Grim Reaper. Romonus did not know if that was true or false, but MacGregor knew more. He just wouldn't tell him. - Ayries_Jesea21dCommented
Kinda meh, there was no particular limit on the wish that was stated. So if I am to choose I would have gone for the END from Medaka.
"I want the Gravity Magic Demon Lord Wilbert had from the better version of DxD. Testament of a Sister New Devil." - Ayries_Jesea24dCommented
His already op so it's pointless actually if you try to suppress his ability directly to awaken a fruit if there is a small possibility to do it.
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Yes, you have idea, but you really lack in details to what's going on at the story. It feels like reading a summary actually.
YES - Ayries_Jesea27dCommented
The story is interesting but it is bit too fast face that it had no emotional impact like this chapter. As for this one, it is a good time for making the expeirienc some setback and challenges I just hope you will at least put more details in the context and not just skip again. Like the adventure with the scarlet witch, it didn't give much engagement and just feels more paragraph. I think you focused too much on the options and items instead of the story. I just advise you to slow down, add more context and just jump to another scene.
Author's Note: So yeah, Oliver versus Mjolnir. Of course, it wasn't the normal hammer; this was Mjolnir twisted and combined with something else, by someone angry at the Asgardians. Anyways, place your bets: will Oliver get his ass handed to him, left crippled with a broken spine, paralyzed and left for dead in the Dark Dimension where he has to fight with all he has, or will he chip and shatter the metal? - Ayries_Jesea1mthCommented
I find his prodigy skill learning speed a bit slow. I know he is already faster learner than the rest but I think it's still slow, plus the skill tree function is kinda useless actually aside from giving him a list of skill names, which he will still need to figure out how to get, its the same way people get skill in tensura they just dont get a notification It would have been more useful if there is instructions but the requirements are hard to do for stronger skills. Like the merciless where the mc need to massacre thousands of lives to get
Ch 15 Getting Humbled by a Bug - Ayries_Jesea1mthReplied to Joanjudo
Good luck with your fanfic
"Meeting Geralt and Ciri is quite unexpected..., but anyway, there's no reason we have this interaction now." Madara murmured and continued jumping with his feet wrapped in chakra, and he didn't even imagine how he had left an impact on the Witcher and princess duo as he jumped through the air in the forest. - Ayries_Jesea1mthReplied to Joanjudo
Well there are actually but I forgot most, but the simplest is too participate in the slme gods trial for a reward of increase in ring age, in douluo dalu 3, they invented some kind of vr of where if they kill the spirit beast there they are able to gather energy to increase the rings age. Overall I think you just need a proper energy to add to the spirit ring to increase the age
"Meeting Geralt and Ciri is quite unexpected..., but anyway, there's no reason we have this interaction now." Madara murmured and continued jumping with his feet wrapped in chakra, and he didn't even imagine how he had left an impact on the Witcher and princess duo as he jumped through the air in the forest. - Ayries_Jesea1mthCommented
They meet a bit too soon, that it feels dull
"Meeting Geralt and Ciri is quite unexpected..., but anyway, there's no reason we have this interaction now." Madara murmured and continued jumping with his feet wrapped in chakra, and he didn't even imagine how he had left an impact on the Witcher and princess duo as he jumped through the air in the forest. - Ayries_Jesea1mthCommented
A bit too much, and detailed. Try to lessen it, it will be less cringe.
"But didn't the prophecy speak of a man with many types of eyes, black, red, and purple, that he would summon something that would make the entire continent tremble and no force in this world could fight him, even the gods feared him!!! Do you think it's real? Will I meet him?" The girl spoke with a mix of excitement and fear. - Ayries_Jesea1mthCommented
Thats what you get for asking an apocalypse world.
'Is this all I can do even after reincarnating and getting those wishes'. Alex had his hands clenched while looking at the massacre happening in front of him. - Ayries_Jesea1mthReplied to Joanjudo
Honestly I don't know, I am too stressed just from college that I don't even wanna do anything and just laid down. Maybe in the future when I don't have anything else to do.
She charged straight at him again but this time at a much faster speed than before. She was upon him before he could get out of the way again, so he grit his teeth without showing it and lifted up his other forearm to block the punch. He'd jumped back onto the stone path, so as he absorbed the punch, his feet punched into the ground creating cracks in the stone bricks.detailChaos has come to Orario (A Seven Deadly Sins X Danmachi SI story)Anime & Comics · Vulkizaro_Zoromi - Ayries_Jesea1mthReplied to HerRoyalReader
Because he has the ability and it is the perfect ability to defend and attack at the same time, and him getting smashed around and damage when he could use the abilty to deflect back the damage is just pure annoying
She charged straight at him again but this time at a much faster speed than before. She was upon him before he could get out of the way again, so he grit his teeth without showing it and lifted up his other forearm to block the punch. He'd jumped back onto the stone path, so as he absorbed the punch, his feet punched into the ground creating cracks in the stone bricks.detailChaos has come to Orario (A Seven Deadly Sins X Danmachi SI story)Anime & Comics · Vulkizaro_Zoromi