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  • 3mth
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    I realise that the mother lacks some information, but she also knows some, for example she know about the sacrifices, maybe not the purpose but she knows that it’s for the god of darkness, she also knows about the cult of light hunting them and one of the angel attacks, so she should know that they are beyond dialogue with the goddess of light. She must be able to also put two and two together with the attacks from high level players.

    Ch 38 Chapter 37: I Don’t Want To Be Alone
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    The Heavenly Martial Empress Returns: An OP Xianxia Returnee LitRPG
    Action · PancakesWitch
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  • 3mth
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    Given that aria has already sown seeds of prophecy where Rimaru will pop up, I foresee her causing chaos somewhere else (enables author to add a ‘new’ continent or kingdoms), therefore using another ‘prophecy bs dau’ technique, warn of portals appearing and monster invasion, to sow some chaos. Also as you have already introduced Re:Zero, I think it would be a nice idea to add Rem and Ram, but using this world’s evolution line to create them, maybe have them as the ‘face’ of Aria’s monster invasion

    Ch 16 The Echidna who Flirts in a Walpurgis
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    Monsters of My Making
    Anime & Comics · SaintlyPervert
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  • 4mth
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    Okay that’s odd, should have been a separate comment not a reply, sorry for that, could have sworn I selected leave a comment when writing that.

    Ch 401 Preparing For The Festival (3)
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    Reincarnated as the Only Human
    Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu
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  • 4mth
    Commented

    Is this supposed to read “as if”? As I don’t remember Auora marrying anyone else but Amadeus

    After Aurora put Amia in her lap, she realized what she was doing, frowning, since this felt weird as she was Amia's wife now, but at the same time, she felt this was right, combined with the pleasurable feeling from her sensitive breasts and the funny feeling in her abdomen.
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    My Fucked Up World Traveling System
    Fantasy · Reacix
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  • 4mth
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    It’s not her first time, as she did it with Amia in chapter 18

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    My Fucked Up World Traveling System
    Fantasy · Reacix
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  • 9mth
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    So let’s get this straight, super beta simp MC is now cucking himself by not giving Maya an ultimatum to leave Jin. He also screwed up by not temporarily taking her stamina recovery skill for himself during the act, to even or swing the playing field in his favour, and making an ultimatum more convincing. Also what is this level bs, dude has analysis complete and yet can’t see levels so far? Also he has killed 4 orcs which are supposedly too strong for his level, and yet he hasn’t levelled yet?

    Ch 12 Chapter 12. Angry Sister
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    Cheat Awakening ( Rewritten )
    Fantasy · kuru_patel
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  • 10mth
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    Sorry but I only read to chapter 48, and at the time of my review there were 72 chapters. Hope others can help you

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    Seduce the hero's mother (GL)
    LGBT+ · Meredit_Yuri
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  • 1yr
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    Where to begin, well it’s bad, very bad. Incompetent gods who can give out systems but don’t know how to use an index or contents to not waste MC’s time in the soul realm, and don’t even know what some of the powers the can give out do. MC who is aware of the chaos happening and his mission decides to farm for 10 years with maybe a month or two of sword training. A relationship with first fl where the confession is majority lies on fl part, with MC-simp forgiving her way to quickly. I’m sorry but this is not for me. Anyway good luck author with this and other works you have

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    Reincarnated With Two Wives! But I am rather weak...
    Fantasy · ShovelingKnight
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  • 1yr
    Posted

    Great read and fantastic story telling up until chapter 48, MC suddenly becomes incredibly stupid, through out the first volume MC changes her future and recognises it, not only that she makes promises to never betray FL and shows to be developing feelings for FL, however 3 chapters later after seeing a new future on her current path she betrays FL even though she knows why the future she saw happened. MC should have instead allied her and FL houses, and used the first princes self destruction to boost second princes power and support, so when the the first prince comes into power (if he still could at that point as he should be a national embarrassment at this point) his demand for MC to marry him will have no support from his supporters as they would deem hostile action against MC’s family political suicide at best. I’m sorry to say that I dropped this book due to actions of MC which I find incomprehensible. But I wish the author the best for the book’s future

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    Seduce the hero's mother (GL)
    LGBT+ · Meredit_Yuri
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Who’s Ling Yu again?

    Ch 197 Mercenary King Returns to Country
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    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasy · starry8sword
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Still reading, and enjoying this new volume

    Ch 81 The knight in grey and black armor and the deranged and sick girl he rescued
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    When I woke up, I was in an Eroge World!
    Fantasy · The_POZ
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    I thought that skill ‘????’ LvMax Divine, made MC immune to mind magic and soul based attacks, so I’ confused how would be knocked unconscious

    Ch 55 An Unknown Place Part-1
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    When I woke up, I was in an Eroge World!
    Fantasy · The_POZ
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    Lumina should be forgiven, but only after the MC observes her new Yandere personality (if kept in rewrite) and comes to terms that like he is different from other iterations, she is also, for this MC needs to mature more. Not fussed on the sucubus being a virgin, but MC is written like a prideful demon so having her sleep with others will go against his nature in my opinion so dream manipulation should be the way to go. Tactical battles plz, and half dwarf sister arc needs a rewrite, it felt way too forced

    Ch -1 Questions For Rewrite
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    Oni! Demon Lord
    Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
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  • 1yr
    Commented

    I don’t understand why the author says Yang Wei was isolated by the sect, when in reality he isolated himself. Day1 first lecture and enlightenment, day 2 mission hall and becomes elder jings medicine boy+herb study, day 3 recives qi sword technique and isolates himself to train for a week, day 9 hidden land announcement and 13 sword techniques training, day 10 sets off to hidden land and meets inner disciples displeased with 4th level qi realm joining them (which is understandable as compared to everyone else there he is beyond weak) but they never said anything.

    Ch 53 Meeting Up
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    Primordial Cultivator
    Eastern · Idczhen
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