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Nini_H1yrCommentedCh 33 Sharing snacks- Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: Why didn't the others land at the same place as me?
'Why are the others didn't land at the same place as me?', Rex asks the system. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: arrived instead of arrives
It didn't take long before they arrives beside the weird rock. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: Silence not Silenced; and was not as instead of and not as
Silenced cover them again, but now Kyran already opened his eyes and not as tense anymore. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: wasn't instead of didn't
Rex smiles lightly before he replied, "I didn't always as calm as now, I'm trained" - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: flabbergasted not flag battered
Looking at this, Rex is flag battered as the raven is still a pain even in its death. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: I told you
Kyran then ripped his shirt area where he got stabbed by the thick thorn before he said, "See? I told it's okay" - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: can't instead of can
'I can penetrate it', Rex thought as he try to stop the sword's vibration. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: 'Aren't you tasked' instead of 'Didn't you are'
"Didn't you are tasked to guard the room? Where were you when this assassin infiltrate Rex's room?", Edward asks Ari with an innocent look. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: standing instead of sanding
"If that's the case, then doesn't that mean that guy is an Awakened too?", Dito mumbles in concern while looking at Rex who is sanding beside Adhara idly. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: 'can still be' not 'is still can be'
The woman in front of Rex is still can be considered young. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: brought not brings
"I already brings the flowers as agreed, now tell me how to go to Lountain City", Rex demanded. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: see instead sight
There are not many people who can see the creature that gives Rex the Zeragon title, and the Faraday University students gathered here to sight this event. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: see instead of sight
Delta should be able to carry the four of them easily, heck Rex will even believe that Delta will be able to carry a dozen of people at once with no problem at all. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: drop 'can'
Because Rex has just reached the sixth rank, the aura he emitted is still chaotic and messy making the four Awakened can feel it directly. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: hazardous just by
Adhara and Edward's eyes widen as they saw Rex's bloodied body, it is clear that the assimilation process that Rex went through is hazardous even by seeing his current state. - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: crumble instead of rumble
Hearing this, the four Awakened looks at each other before the staff continue, "The Spiritual Chamber can't lock the spirit! I need you guys to create a barrier until the assimilation process is finished or the whole building will rumble!" - Nini_H1yrCommented
Should be: presence not present
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