The Turtle and a Fraud

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Author here,

As you all probably know, I'm still a new author so all I want is feedback.

And for today, I want to hear your thoughts about the fight scene in these chapters. You can give positive and negative feedback, just go write it in the comments!

I also have some thoughts about a mass release.

If you guys are excited about it, then I'll make it happen :)

Happy reading, Alpha author signing out!

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"What?!", Adhara shouted in shock.

She doubted Edward just a moment ago, but right in front of her eyes, Edward blocked a direct attack from Fergus which she can't manage to do before.

It's simply an eye-opener as Edward stands fiercely under the cracking lightning.

Other slaves that are now already running to the corner away from the fight were also shocked, in their eyes, Edward who is a normal person surprisingly managed to block Fergus's attack.