nice chap

I just know that the quality hasn't dropped, and I'm not an expert on this but Dumbledore and McGonagall's actions in the chapter are still very faithful to their characters. I would like to praise the independence you give your characters, all the fuss that Cho and Hermione caused seems like a normal reaction to anyone reading it, but authors would not normally allow this course of action, perhaps by overcomplicating things. I can see that you're not too afraid of giving independence to your characters and that's a rare trait, I have expectations. It's strange that your work has so few reviews, maybe the synopsis is the problem, the part where a figure like the six paths intrudes must put off many readers, I don't want you to change your story, but Sasuke could have been defeated by other ways, even naruto defeating him before he had the chance to use his mangekyo wouldn't be a problem, although it's not a very interesting defeat, at least it doesn't alienate anyone. I'll keep reading anyway, tough luck for those who gave up over something so silly

It's not a good story, after all, the whole collecting girls thing is a dirty topic. But it's interesting, and even if a girl joins the harem, it doesn't seem like she becomes loyal to the protagonist, the author still hasn't created artificial feelings to make things easier and Sasuke remains focused on his revenge. Apart from the boring beginning with a figure like the Sage of the Six Paths meddling to ruin the protagonist's plans, so far I feel like it's worth reading.

Part 2

you can see in the title that it's naruto's fight, just skip it

He is rewriting naruto, he had fights other than naruto and sasuke fights. Let's just skip chapters, there's no harm in that

Or he could just use salt...

bah

but even your teacher knows you're an uzumaki

F Akane

Everything becomes a joke when the system appears

brain?

F

Does he really believe there are 100,000 people in remnant?

wtf

I didn't understand why the protagonist's sudden despair, are the 9 heralds already marching towards him by any chance?

Will he still degenerate like the old mc?

Someone will still ask how much the mc's butt costs

Of course you can argue that it takes at least a hundred chapters for the author to throw his story in the trash, but I will tell you that after a hundred chapters the protagonist is still a child, and reading that much will only bring you disappointment.

I already tried it, it sucks. A stupid, overpowered monk shows up and things just get more and more Chinese.